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June. 19.2024

Swap It Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich

~Placed Third~

In your eyes, I see stars align. In my world, you are the sunshine. Our love's boat, no waves can capsize. I see stars align in your eyes. Your smile, blossoming of flower. Your presence, warmth in my bower. With you I can trek any mile. Blossoming of flower, your smile. In trials of life, you stand strong. As prop, you are with me lifelong. With you by my side, there's no strife. You stand strong in trials of life. On your way, I wish every bliss. Pray, nothing you crave, you will miss. With you, joyously, I shall stay. I wish every bliss on your way!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2024 9:36:00 AM

Such a beautiful tribute in swap quatrain form. Big congrats, Valsa

Valsa George
Date: 7/1/2024 9:49:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Andrea....

Stephan McBride

Date: 6/24/2024 5:46:00 PM

Love it, what a gift in writing you have to captivate the mind into a world of love, peace and joy to be found around us : )

Tonye George

Date: 6/22/2024 6:35:00 PM

Love is a beautiful thing. Funny how we love something or someone and we become overwhelmed with everything about them. Their smile, laughter, breath, sadness, etc. becomes our muse and our happiness. Lovely one Dear Val.

Regina Elliott

Date: 6/20/2024 9:30:00 AM

Beauteous poem, Valsa, a gentle serenade to the reader's heart. My very best wishes for the contest with this most worthy entry. Blessings

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2024 5:00:00 AM

Ahh!! So romantic. Wanting the best for another and not wanting anything in return is true love. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 6/19/2024 10:44:00 PM

I enjoy the endearment of this quatrain. It sounds like he is special.

Silent One

Date: 6/19/2024 2:34:00 PM

You have done this form very well with great swap refrains.. It's a tender and earnest tribute to a loved one, beautifully capturing the emotions of love, admiration, and commitment. The consistent structure and repeated refrains create a rhythmic and harmonious flow, enhancing the lyrical quality of the poem. The use of natural imagery and metaphors effectively conveys the depth of your feelings, making the poem relatable and evocative. Its simplicity and clarity make it a touching and memorable expression of affection.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/19/2024 1:23:00 PM

So beautiful, Valsa with a lovely lyrical quality that sings from the heart of the lover! Indeed love gives us courage to continue and stand strong "in trials of life." I love the way your poem ends with a blessing of bliss for your beloved. Wonderful entry for the contest. Best wishes for a win, dear friend. Sending you blessings of bliss.

Jay Narain

Date: 6/19/2024 10:14:00 AM

Beautifu swap love poem. So heartfelt and romantic. Nice. My FAVE.

Ink Empress

Date: 6/19/2024 7:46:00 AM

You did this form just effortlessly making sure your lines flow so beautifully! I think this is one of the best iv read for this theme and prompt. I especially loved “ Your smile, blossoming of flower. Your presence, warmth in my bower. With you I can trek any mile.” how heartfelt! I thibk andrea will love this as she loves romance! Best wishes! Fave

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/19/2024 7:30:00 AM

This is a wonderful swap poem for the contest. I tried my luck with it but found it hard to finish.