To You, O Mother

When the season turns from winds to carols
When time for sorrel brew arrives
When gungo gives no more honey to the hives
When the poor rejoices in our morals
When it's time to clean the shade and light
The "Home Sweet Home" lamp again
When the barter is being mixed, and pain
Comes like birds from northern flight
When I cry in silence
I cry for you again, O mother, dear.
Then devoid of evidence
For what I toil ... to bring you honor rare
Striving by scholarship and grace
To bring you wealth, esteem and joy
How miserable is this empty place
And the dreams aborted for you boy
When the roll up yonder calls all name to see
The glory of God's unfailing splendor
Then I shall hope to see
The greatest tribute there to you, to you, O mother.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Goff Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 4:43 PM
line 7 to 8 leaps with particular splendor! L'nass! ....I felt like you were talkin' 'bout my Mom! nice effect, bringing the reader into your poem in such a way, cool indeed, jimbo
Jordan Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 8:01 AM
L'nass how are you doing bro - I love the respect shown to your mother in this poem - Thank you for all the kind words and support - I've been really busy with school but now I am one final away from Winter break - God Bless you my friend, mj
Buckling Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 7:55 AM
Really enjoyed this one. It seems to have a turn at the end, kind of like a volta in a sonnet, which gave me a feeling of completeness, a clear emotional poignancy. Great stuff!
P Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 7:31 AM
Happy xmas until the month of january 2010'.
Moreno Avatar
December 12, 2009 at 11:38 PM
Those last 3 lines were divine L'nass, excellent work...Raul
Johnson Avatar
December 12, 2009 at 10:55 PM
Lovely. Any mother would be proud Love, Joyce
Haick Avatar
December 12, 2009 at 9:37 PM
Beautiful tribute to your Mother, L'nass! I am sure she is proud of you. God bless. Peace and love, Audrey
Nutter Avatar
December 12, 2009 at 4:29 PM
Excellent write and a nice tribute to your mother as well as your faith. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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