To Yoda An Ode Contest

The man looked at his twinkle
Shucks what's become of me
I used to rise and shine
Now all i do is pee

Yoda said, "Size doesn't matter
Saying take a look at me
I have  the force behind me"
But still  I am so twee

"Come close and feel the force
Around us, you and me".
"Everywhere the fire" Said I
Looking down hopefully

Guess it hasn't reached that far
Will stoke the burners well
"Do or do not, there is no try"
Are the words that Yoda tells

So next time when in the loo
Trying to raise a smile
Remembering what yoda has 
I outdo him by a mile.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/27/2013 4:44:00 PM
Seren, you made the contest look like fun, as always, good winning poem, Congrats~SKAT
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Date: 4/8/2013 2:05:00 PM
Thank you Skat I just realised that I was in the winning zone lol...Seren
Date: 3/22/2013 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations Seren .. Donna
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Date: 3/22/2013 6:26:00 PM
lol hope it made you smile ...Seren
Date: 3/22/2013 4:26:00 PM
SEREN, a nice winning poem... many congrats :-).... always & forever* PD
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Date: 3/22/2013 6:26:00 PM
lol Linda one to put a smile on the faces ...Seren
Date: 3/22/2013 10:58:00 AM
Silly theme nice job. Liked it very much. Jen
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/22/2013 12:48:00 PM
Thanks Jen I like to enter contests to support people but was lost on this one...Seren
Date: 3/22/2013 9:17:00 AM
So cute.......what a cute poem and so fun!!
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Date: 3/22/2013 9:54:00 AM
thanks Carrie, I had a problem trying to think of what to write ...Seren
Date: 3/22/2013 5:55:00 AM
Excellent poem it be! Write like Yoda, you do. Laugh you make us. On your win congratulations we give!
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Date: 3/22/2013 6:36:00 AM
Thank you Roy. ..... Seren
Date: 3/22/2013 5:53:00 AM
Many congrats on your winning spot Seren love xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 3/22/2013 6:36:00 AM
Thanks mandy but didnt you do well...Seren
Date: 3/20/2013 6:29:00 PM
Got a laugh out of this, Seren, thnx:) Jag
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Date: 3/20/2013 9:20:00 PM
hehe Jag am glad I did ....Seren
Date: 3/20/2013 10:14:00 AM
ha ha love it great take xx
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Date: 3/20/2013 9:22:00 PM
oh my Mandy, didnt know what to write......Seren
Date: 3/19/2013 2:34:00 PM
That is funny, and the lines are spot on. Good luck in contest.
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Date: 3/19/2013 6:53:00 PM
Thank you David. Seren
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