To Yoda An Ode Contest

The man looked at his twinkle
Shucks what's become of me
I used to rise and shine
Now all i do is pee

Yoda said, "Size doesn't matter
Saying take a look at me
I have  the force behind me"
But still  I am so twee

"Come close and feel the force
Around us, you and me".
"Everywhere the fire" Said I
Looking down hopefully

Guess it hasn't reached that far
Will stoke the burners well
"Do or do not, there is no try"
Are the words that Yoda tells

So next time when in the loo
Trying to raise a smile
Remembering what yoda has 
I outdo him by a mile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A  Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 4:44 PM
Seren, you made the contest look like fun, as always, good winning poem, Congrats~SKAT
Roberts Avatar
April 8, 2013 at 2:05 PM
Thank you Skat I just realised that I was in the winning zone lol...Seren
Jones Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 4:39 PM
Congratulations Seren .. Donna
Roberts Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 6:26 PM
lol hope it made you smile ...Seren
A   Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 4:26 PM
SEREN, a nice winning poem... many congrats :-).... always & forever* PD
Roberts Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 6:26 PM
lol Linda one to put a smile on the faces ...Seren
Sister Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 10:58 AM
Silly theme nice job. Liked it very much. Jen
Roberts Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 12:48 PM
Thanks Jen I like to enter contests to support people but was lost on this one...Seren
Richards Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 9:17 AM
So cute.......what a cute poem and so fun!!
Roberts Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 9:54 AM
thanks Carrie, I had a problem trying to think of what to write ...Seren
Jerden Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 5:55 AM
Excellent poem it be! Write like Yoda, you do. Laugh you make us. On your win congratulations we give!
Roberts Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 6:36 AM
Thank you Roy. ..... Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 5:53 AM
Many congrats on your winning spot Seren love xx
Roberts Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 6:36 AM
Thanks mandy but didnt you do well...Seren
Nair Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 6:29 PM
Got a laugh out of this, Seren, thnx:) Jag
Roberts Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 9:20 PM
hehe Jag am glad I did ....Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 10:14 AM
ha ha love it great take xx
Roberts Avatar
March 20, 2013 at 9:22 PM
oh my Mandy, didnt know what to write......Seren
Fisher Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 2:34 PM
That is funny, and the lines are spot on. Good luck in contest.
Roberts Avatar
March 19, 2013 at 6:53 PM
Thank you David. Seren
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