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To Women

No mortal has triumphed to conquer your appeal,
From Enkidu's Shamhat to Cain's Aclima it starts
Longing for possessing you was part of the ordeal,
For lust grew unfathomed with the first love darts
Craving carved its roots in men with a hefty zeal,
Until it blurred our nous with the serum of hearts
Till now the journey keeps marching without retreat
If all is summoned, faith to you until the endmost beat!

© Guru Jad 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/1/2013 7:12:00 AM
My dear Guru, this is a gem of a poem! Profound and provocative. An Excellent topic with an insightful look! It deserves the highest of marks! Thank you!
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Guru Jad
Date: 3/2/2013 5:12:00 AM
I can never thank you enough... but I will try to. Thanks a million!!
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/1/2013 7:45:00 AM
Not hubble at all! Your response is a poem in itself! Credit to you, Sir!
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Guru Jad
Date: 3/1/2013 7:34:00 AM
Dearest Dr. Trifiatis, your comment is an emerald that adds glimmering sparks to my humble ottava rima... elevating it into higher levels. You have my deepest respect!
Date: 2/28/2013 1:52:00 PM
Methinks we are privy to the merest tip of your iceberg my friend. I look forward with anticipation to more of your work. God Bless. D.
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Guru Jad
Date: 2/28/2013 4:23:00 PM
Permit me to differ with you, honourable Dave.. It is only through your guiding, tips, advices, and comments that I may advance. Thank you for being so genteel!
Date: 2/27/2013 3:40:00 PM
Dropped by to say hi. I hope you are having a wonderful day.
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Date: 2/28/2013 5:38:00 AM
Hiiii... It is a lovely rainy day.. Rain makes me extremely happy!! But I am happier with your drop-by! :D All the best.
Date: 2/26/2013 7:11:00 AM
Ah the power of women, I to am captivated. If you have a chance read my poem "Your Ocean" It speaks of the power my woman holds over me. You are very talented Jad I love the symbolism you have used to knit your story together.
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Guru Jad
Date: 2/26/2013 8:09:00 AM
The art of women is definitely grand and old.. their magic is limitless.. I am excited to read your poem,, I am pretty sure your experience is most exquisite. Thank you for your precious comment.
Date: 2/26/2013 12:50:00 AM
Hell Guru, your poem has such a depth..wanted to keep reading..was taken a current of philosophy..plz view my poems too and kindly comment..thnks
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Guru Jad
Date: 2/26/2013 3:05:00 AM
Hello Shan Jehan.. Thank you for stopping by. I am happy you enjoyed the write. Surely will view your poems. All the best!
Date: 2/25/2013 8:02:00 PM
Hello Guru, stopping by to say hi and good night. I also have time to read one more before I go to bed. Glad I spotted this lovely OTTAVA RIMA poem, I'm glad we are part of the ordeal. (to us women) hope you alert me when you post another poem. Good night ~LINDA
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Date: 2/26/2013 3:03:00 AM
Dear Linda... your comments fill my heart with joy. And YES... it is all about you... women... the whole universe rotates around you... and we must admit it.. you deserve this! Good night dear.
Date: 2/25/2013 7:08:00 PM
I will not even pretend to know or be familiar with "Enkidu's Shamhat to Cain's Aclima". What I will say is this... you have an amazing talent for a style of poetry that i personally could only hope to emulate. I am truly truly impressed my friend! I look forward to our continuing friendship. Cheers, Jack
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Guru Jad
Date: 2/26/2013 3:02:00 AM
Your friendship is a great honour for me.. There are no limits for my bliss right now.. Thank you!
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Guru Jad
Date: 2/26/2013 3:01:00 AM
Sir Jack, In "The Epic of Gilgamesh", the girl Shamhat was sent to Enkidu to tame him. Using her art, she captivated Enkidu's heart! As for Aclima, she was supposed to be for Abel (son of Adam) but Cain coveted her and later killed his brother when God did not accept his offerings. The two cases are examples of how women were the whole target of men , and that without them man is lost! -
Date: 2/25/2013 5:43:00 PM
Once more...lovely, my dear! :) You have a way with playing with words that is most appealing! :) Great poem!
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Date: 2/25/2013 5:54:00 PM
Thank you, my dear. I thought of expressing my appreciation towards Women.. who have filled our hearts with all kinds of emotions!