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To Whom Sweet Hosannas Ring As life goes passing by Soon we are to be judged Thrilled must be God above When clearly there’s no doubt Our aim was spreading love.Quote - Poets own As life goes passing by The mind starts to wonder Is there or is there not Heaven in sky above A flawless beauty spot. As life goes passing by Treasure moments in time Show that dreams can come true Share God’s words o’er the earth A parting gift from you. As life goes passing by Listen to sounds of rain View sun rays dance on sea Smell musk rose blooms in June Afore bells toll for thee. As life goes passing by And soon it’s time to leave Fear not, angels stand near Beseech no one should weep Just cheer that you were here. 10th April 2022 * * * Form M - Monchielle - New’ Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France Theme used - No. 3 Death

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Sally Eslinger

Date: 6/13/2022 8:16:00 AM

Belle, lines to echo over the Earth! Set the dimension for my day. You could make this new form classic!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/13/2022 9:49:00 AM

Thank you very much Sally, glad to have set the dimension for your day. I do hope you are recovering well. Faith, love and happiness always… Belle

John Watt

Date: 5/1/2022 3:18:00 PM

Belle, these are lovely hope-filled and comforting thoughts regarding that day when bells shall toll. I love your ending with "Beseech no one should weep / Just cheer that you were here." I sincerely hope that will be the case when I depart. Congratulations for your win with this beautiful elegy in monchielle form ~ John

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/1/2022 8:40:00 PM

Thank you John, I appreciate your generous comments tremendously… Belle

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/24/2022 9:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Belle, with this wonderful poem of joyous faith. I love your beautiful quote, also. :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/1/2022 8:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Evelyn, your kind words mean a lot… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/18/2022 5:28:00 AM

Belle my dear friend. congratulations on your richly deserved win in this contest - as do all your poems, this one is also heartfelt! Happy Easter Monday! Love and hugs, Jennifer

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/1/2022 8:35:00 PM

Sorry I’m late replying to your comments Jennifer, haven’t had much time lately to spend on poetry. Gradually things are improving my husband is recovering slowly. Thank you for the kind words, appreciated. Love and hugs in return… Belle

Constance La France

Date: 4/17/2022 3:21:00 PM

Belle, congratulations on your win in my Monchielle contest with your beautiful poem and I like your quote and image too ~Constance

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/1/2022 8:30:00 PM

Thank you Constance, it’s a pleasure to take part in your contests and to try out different poetry forms too… Belle

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/16/2022 5:42:00 PM

Congratulations, Belle!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/1/2022 8:27:00 PM

Thank you very much Kim… Belle

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/16/2022 4:18:00 PM

A belated congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/1/2022 8:27:00 PM

A belated thank you Sara, comments appreciated… Belle

Beata Agustin

Date: 4/16/2022 3:36:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/1/2022 8:25:00 PM

Thank you for your kind comments Beata. God bless you too… Belle

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/15/2022 9:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a wonderful write with picture. Love your line, "Fear not, angels stand near." So True. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/1/2022 8:23:00 PM

Thank you Paula - belated I know, have been very busy caring for my husband who’s been very ill as you know. Will be back into the swing of things soon, hopefully. Blessings… Belle

Terry Miller

Date: 4/15/2022 12:38:00 AM

Excellent, congratulations.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/1/2022 8:19:00 PM

Thank you so much Terry, I’m most appreciative… Belle

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/14/2022 10:02:00 PM

Excellent poetry, Belle, congratulations:)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/1/2022 8:17:00 PM

Thank you Jo, most grateful… Belle

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/14/2022 9:36:00 PM

Beautiful write, Belle, congrats on your win!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/1/2022 8:16:00 PM

Thank you very much Unseeking Seeker, appreciated… Belle

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/14/2022 8:27:00 PM

"Fear not, angels stand near" - Fear not, angels stand near" - Very strengthening words. Congratulations!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/29/2022 6:26:00 PM

Thank you Christuraj, very much appreciated… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/14/2022 11:47:00 AM

Congratulations on a very well-deserved win, Belle. Blessings

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/14/2022 2:25:00 PM

Thank you very much Sotto, I didn’t know the contest had been judged, what a lovely surprise. Blessings to you too ~ Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/11/2022 2:12:00 AM

I would despair if there were no heaven. Hope your husband is better.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/14/2022 2:23:00 PM

I’d despair also if there was no heaven to go to. My husband is slowly improving, we’ve been told it could take up to twenty four months to fully recover from sepsis. Thank you Victor… Belle

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/10/2022 6:45:00 PM

“Just cheer that you were here”. Belle...all the poem is great but that last line got me. And, will add, will be more than glad to be there. Forever cherished by the Creator, Himself. Pangie

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/14/2022 2:19:00 PM

Thank you Pangie, for sure we’ll be glad to be there. I was pleased to read what you said about the last line, everyone has to pass on eventually and having been here is worthy of good cheer… Belle