Beryl Edmonds Poet Monchielle Stanza

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To Whom Sweet Hosannas Ring

To Whom Sweet Hosannas Ring
As life goes passing by 
Soon we are to be judged
Thrilled must be God above
When clearly there’s no doubt 
Our aim was spreading love.Quote - Poets own
As life goes passing by 
The mind starts to wonder
Is there or is there not
Heaven in sky above
A flawless beauty spot.

As life goes passing by
Treasure moments in time 
Show that dreams can come true
Share God’s words o’er the earth
A parting gift from you.

As life goes passing by
Listen to sounds of rain
View sun rays dance on sea
Smell musk rose blooms in June
Afore bells toll for thee.

As life goes passing by
And soon it’s time to leave
Fear not, angels stand near
Beseech no one should weep
Just cheer that you were here.
10th April 2022
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Form M - Monchielle - New’ Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France 
Theme used - No. 3 Death

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Sally Eslinger June 13, 2022 at 8:16 AM Belle, lines to echo over the Earth! Set the dimension for my day. You could make this new form classic! Beryl Edmonds June 13, 2022 at 9:49 AM Thank you very much Sally, glad to have set the dimension for your day. I do hope you are recovering well. Faith, love and happiness always… Belle

John Watt May 1, 2022 at 3:18 PM Belle, these are lovely hope-filled and comforting thoughts regarding that day when bells shall toll. I love your ending with "Beseech no one should weep / Just cheer that you were here." I sincerely hope that will be the case when I depart. Congratulations for your win with this beautiful elegy in monchielle form ~ John Beryl Edmonds May 1, 2022 at 8:40 PM Thank you John, I appreciate your generous comments tremendously… Belle

Evelyn Judy Buehler April 24, 2022 at 9:23 PM Congratulations on your win, Belle, with this wonderful poem of joyous faith. I love your beautiful quote, also. :) Beryl Edmonds May 1, 2022 at 8:37 PM Thank you so much Evelyn, your kind words mean a lot… Belle

Jennifer Proxenos April 18, 2022 at 5:28 AM Belle my dear friend. congratulations on your richly deserved win in this contest - as do all your poems, this one is also heartfelt! Happy Easter Monday! Love and hugs, Jennifer Beryl Edmonds May 1, 2022 at 8:35 PM Sorry I’m late replying to your comments Jennifer, haven’t had much time lately to spend on poetry. Gradually things are improving my husband is recovering slowly. Thank you for the kind words, appreciated. Love and hugs in return… Belle

Constance La France April 17, 2022 at 3:21 PM Belle, congratulations on your win in my Monchielle contest with your beautiful poem and I like your quote and image too ~Constance Beryl Edmonds May 1, 2022 at 8:30 PM Thank you Constance, it’s a pleasure to take part in your contests and to try out different poetry forms too… Belle

Sara Kendrick April 16, 2022 at 4:18 PM A belated congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara Beryl Edmonds May 1, 2022 at 8:27 PM A belated thank you Sara, comments appreciated… Belle

Beata Agustin April 16, 2022 at 3:36 AM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Beryl Edmonds May 1, 2022 at 8:25 PM Thank you for your kind comments Beata. God bless you too… Belle

Paula Goldsmith April 15, 2022 at 9:29 AM Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a wonderful write with picture. Love your line, "Fear not, angels stand near." So True. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter.............. Beryl Edmonds May 1, 2022 at 8:23 PM Thank you Paula - belated I know, have been very busy caring for my husband who’s been very ill as you know. Will be back into the swing of things soon, hopefully. Blessings… Belle

Terry Miller April 15, 2022 at 12:38 AM Excellent, congratulations. Beryl Edmonds May 1, 2022 at 8:19 PM Thank you so much Terry, I’m most appreciative… Belle

Joanna Daniel April 14, 2022 at 10:02 PM Excellent poetry, Belle, congratulations:) Beryl Edmonds May 1, 2022 at 8:17 PM Thank you Jo, most grateful… Belle

Unseeking Seeker April 14, 2022 at 9:36 PM Beautiful write, Belle, congrats on your win! Beryl Edmonds May 1, 2022 at 8:16 PM Thank you very much Unseeking Seeker, appreciated… Belle

Christuraj Alex April 14, 2022 at 8:27 PM "Fear not, angels stand near" - Fear not, angels stand near" - Very strengthening words. Congratulations! Beryl Edmonds April 29, 2022 at 6:26 PM Thank you Christuraj, very much appreciated… Belle

Sotto Poet April 14, 2022 at 11:47 AM Congratulations on a very well-deserved win, Belle. Blessings Beryl Edmonds April 14, 2022 at 2:25 PM Thank you very much Sotto, I didn’t know the contest had been judged, what a lovely surprise. Blessings to you too ~ Belle

Victor Buhagiar April 11, 2022 at 2:12 AM I would despair if there were no heaven. Hope your husband is better. Beryl Edmonds April 14, 2022 at 2:23 PM I’d despair also if there was no heaven to go to. My husband is slowly improving, we’ve been told it could take up to twenty four months to fully recover from sepsis. Thank you Victor… Belle

Panagiota Romios April 10, 2022 at 6:45 PM “Just cheer that you were here”. Belle...all the poem is great but that last line got me. And, will add, will be more than glad to be there. Forever cherished by the Creator, Himself. Pangie Beryl Edmonds April 14, 2022 at 2:19 PM Thank you Pangie, for sure we’ll be glad to be there. I was pleased to read what you said about the last line, everyone has to pass on eventually and having been here is worthy of good cheer… Belle