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Take me
Hold me 
Love me
I am a leaf in your breeze
Paint me my colours
And I will fall from the sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 11:10 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Gordon Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 9:28 PM
Picturing this in my head right now :) beautiful poetry Rainy Sky! What a wonderful read! Congrats on your well deserved win
Sky Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 5:11 AM
Thanks! I'm glad my imagery had an effect :)
Ashley Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 7:40 PM
Your poem is absolutely gorgeous, Rainy Sky. Congratulations on your excellent and well deserved trophy win. Blissful poetry! Warmest wishes..
Sky Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 5:11 AM
Thanks Susan! This comment means a lot :)
Wood Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 3:45 PM
This is pure poetry! Very well done!
Sky Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 5:09 AM
Thank you, Dean!
Richards Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Very lovely this is ! Big congrats to you !
Sky Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 5:09 AM
Thanks Carrie
Rodrigues Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 7:41 AM
Lovely! Congrats, Rainy Sky!
Sky Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 5:08 AM
Thanks! :)
Gauthier Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 6:25 AM
Beautiful. Congrats on your top win.
Sky Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 5:07 AM
Thank you
George   Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 5:47 AM
Wow! What more can I say? Many congrats on our first place win. Sincerely, Elaine
Sky Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 5:04 AM
Thanks Elaine :)
Gentry Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 5:11 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win! Well done.
Sky Avatar
May 9, 2018 at 5:04 AM
Thanks!
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