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Poetry/Rubaiyat/To Weep Tears
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1562-692-18
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, July 18, 2023
For the International Contest, Choose A Line (Line #1 Chosen)
Sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 08/13/2023

First Place

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"A dagger of pain, a tear of grief." Quote by _Constance I go to the forest where we once walked, and stroll down the paths where we laughed and talked; each time "to weep the tears that never learn" ... in this place we loved my grief is unlocked ! Will always love you- but now my thoughts turn, to remembering Mom ... oh, how I yearn; the pages of life flutter in the breeze ... I can look back but can never return ! I read the beloved names under the trees, and weep my great grief- falling to my knees; many, too many engraved names in stone ... I come in Wintertime and my tears freeze ! I crying at night when I am alone, and in my dreams your voices moan and groan; for a thousand years and more I will mourn ... will not let go- for my grief is moss-grown !

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Date: 8/13/2023 8:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/quote/picture/ending. As always, I enjoyed it. Have a great day with your win............
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Constance La France
Date: 8/15/2023 3:22:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations, comment, and compliment, blessings !
Date: 8/13/2023 7:13:00 AM
A poignant write Constance, Very nicely done, Congrats on your win
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Constance La France
Date: 8/13/2023 2:19:00 PM
Joseph, thank you so much for the contest and my wonderful placement, and for the compliment and congrats, blessings !
Date: 7/18/2023 10:30:00 PM
so far so good.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/21/2023 7:48:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the compliment, it took me 2 days but I finally finished the poem !
Date: 7/18/2023 10:44:00 AM
Good luck finishing these emotion filled lines, Constance. A wonderful beginning. Blessings as you work through this place of grief and growth as you unlock your grief to examine it once again.
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Constance La France
Date: 7/21/2023 7:48:00 AM
Sam, thank you so much for the compliment, my grief is always below the surface and it can be called up very easily !
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