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To Understand Our Love

Oh, if they could understand our love They would see what I see in your eyes Ev’ry star that lights the sky above Not the diff’rent worlds our love belies They would see what I see in your eyes Touch, peerless in nature, taunts the dove Not the diff’rent worlds our love belies Purring softness, I can but dream of Touch, peerless in nature, taunts the dove Stallions such as I, cannot disguise Purring softness, I can but dream of Notions of my soul, my heart complies Stallions such as I, cannot disguise Ev’ry star that lights the sky above Notions of my soul, my heart complies Oh, if they could understand our love

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Date: 5/9/2020 10:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Mike , in the pantoum rhyme and personification contest. I love the way you made the stallion so human. Hugs Eve
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/10/2020 6:26:00 AM
Than you so much Eve, I am am so excited to have placed. It was a fun contest and I really needed to concentrate on something of beauty. Happy Sunday xxoo
Date: 5/9/2020 5:53:00 PM
So elegantly worded, Mike. Great take on the horse and kitty GIF. Congrats on your #1 placement ~ John
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/10/2020 6:26:00 AM
Thank so much John!!
Date: 4/18/2020 5:13:00 PM
Hello Mike Gintile, oh so romantic. Did you win the contest? Enjoy your evening my friend. Be safe.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/19/2020 7:13:00 AM
Hello Mike Gentile, I enjoyed this poem. Happy Sunday my friend. Be safe. Enjoy your day my friend. xxxx-oooo.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/18/2020 6:13:00 PM
Thanks so much Darlene xxoo
Date: 4/13/2020 4:16:00 PM
Very well done Mike--enjoyed the soft tones and vibes. All the best.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/13/2020 8:52:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay!!
Date: 4/13/2020 3:16:00 PM
Very romantic Mike, so well written, it's a form I struggle with, good luck in the contest. Stay safe. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/13/2020 3:50:00 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. You stay safe as well !!

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