To Touch the Sun

And what chance have I to reach up and touch the sun? Is it not too far? Not for those like I who live within our own minds imagination.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2010 at 9:44 AM
Good metaphor, Paula. Touching sky, sun, stars and moon!
R Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 5:30 AM
Loved this Senryu.In your dreams you can do the impossible, such a sweet though and so true. Your poem made me smile. Emily
Roberts Avatar
August 28, 2010 at 10:08 PM
beautifully written
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