James Fraser Poet Rhyme

To Touch Her Heart

What does it take
To De-ice a heart
In a passionate man
In need of a new start
 
Cobwebbed and lost
In declining beat
Not only bleeds
But occasionally weeps
 
Then out of the blue
A maiden so fair
Literal goddess
With care and flair
 
Her warmth with words
Has restarted my heart
Ignited my wants
And poetic parts
 
One day
I will make a new start
To meet this fair maiden
To touch her heart



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Lynette Chachere July 27, 2009 at 4:20 PM Magnificently Romantic James. I adore this poem!<: ~Always Lynette

Charlene Bird July 17, 2009 at 8:08 PM Romantic and beautiful piece here laced with a possible love! Good luck friend! Thank you for your kind comments always appreciated.

Carolyn Devonshire July 17, 2009 at 7:34 PM Your romantic words could de-ice the Polar Cap, James. Surely, this fair maiden would be warmed by your heartfelt words. I can only imagine what it must be like to find a man who relates passion as well as you do. Genuinely moving poem, James! You have certainly touched my heart. Love, Carolyn

Sandra Hudson July 17, 2009 at 5:59 PM What does it take to de-ice a heart? hummm Hot water? Warm hands? Champagne? A little bling bling perhaps. Lets look into the chic-tionary: De-icer: One loving man with patience, understanding and a hot body! o-kay!-AA

Barbara Gorelick July 17, 2009 at 5:38 PM Wonderful rhyming here..lucky maiden..oh to be a maiden again. BG

Barbara Johnson July 17, 2009 at 4:09 PM James, I enjoyed this write, love the words you used and the flow, very romantic. Thank you for your wonderful comments, very much appreciated, yes you may add Reaching for Peaks to your fav, thank you

Charmaine Chircop July 17, 2009 at 3:55 PM these verses are so romantic,your fair maiden is very lucky--very deep write Fraser--charma

Sara Kendrick July 17, 2009 at 3:41 PM Love this one, James. I don't know if it is fantasy or real. If real there is always the person exactly made for the other person. Sara