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To Touch Her Heart

What does it take To De-ice a heart In a passionate man In need of a new start Cobwebbed and lost In declining beat Not only bleeds But occasionally weeps Then out of the blue A maiden so fair Literal goddess With care and flair Her warmth with words Has restarted my heart Ignited my wants And poetic parts One day I will make a new start To meet this fair maiden To touch her heart http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love4.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/27/2009 4:20:00 PM
Magnificently Romantic James. I adore this poem!<: ~Always Lynette
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Date: 7/17/2009 8:08:00 PM
Romantic and beautiful piece here laced with a possible love! Good luck friend! Thank you for your kind comments always appreciated.
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Date: 7/17/2009 7:34:00 PM
Your romantic words could de-ice the Polar Cap, James. Surely, this fair maiden would be warmed by your heartfelt words. I can only imagine what it must be like to find a man who relates passion as well as you do. Genuinely moving poem, James! You have certainly touched my heart. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/17/2009 5:59:00 PM
What does it take to de-ice a heart? hummm Hot water? Warm hands? Champagne? A little bling bling perhaps. Lets look into the chic-tionary: De-icer: One loving man with patience, understanding and a hot body! o-kay!-AA
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Date: 7/17/2009 5:38:00 PM
Wonderful rhyming here..lucky maiden..oh to be a maiden again. BG
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Date: 7/17/2009 4:09:00 PM
James, I enjoyed this write, love the words you used and the flow, very romantic. Thank you for your wonderful comments, very much appreciated, yes you may add Reaching for Peaks to your fav, thank you
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Date: 7/17/2009 3:55:00 PM
these verses are so romantic,your fair maiden is very lucky--very deep write Fraser--charma
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Date: 7/17/2009 3:41:00 PM
Love this one, James. I don't know if it is fantasy or real. If real there is always the person exactly made for the other person. Sara
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