To the Ones Who Left Me With My Heart In My Hands

Counting them on one hand,
the fingers dismembered, 
but remembered 'siempre' and 
a day beyond that, because 
hardwired to give it, both body 
and soul, should anyone ASK, 
she was playing a role. She 
gives amnesty now, knowing 
needs were at odds in petitioning 
the gods: seeking Asclepius,
not Eros, desperate to heal.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Situation Avatar
June 26, 2012 at 5:46 PM
the truth is yes we want a doctor to tell us whats wrong. but what we all know it that we don't want anyone else excepththe one who dumped us. just so we can dump them first.
Christian Avatar
June 25, 2012 at 12:04 AM
aww a nice poem, forgivnes is good, God bless from diane
A   Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 5:04 PM
Nola, love it...pd
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 5:58 AM
Enjoyed reading your work today! Lori
Andresen Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 5:38 AM
Nicely poem - well done Nola. - oxox Anne-Lise
Henderson Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 5:10 AM
Forgiveness is a must...peace and blessings.
Perez Avatar
June 24, 2012 at 7:17 AM
Dear Steven, Yes. Everybody gets hurt sometimes. Forgiveness is Huge. Robert Downey Jr. said that. N.
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