To the One That Got Away

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Thank you, the one that got away. It's no use wondering what might've been We were never meant be. I do wish you well. Thank you, the one that got away. A little birdie told me you did steal the heart of another; I wish you both the best! It's the way destiny intended it. Thank you, the one that got away. Our spark of romance never lit as we were much too young to understand what love meant then. Thank you so much, the one that got away, because you've led me to my true love, my precious jewel of a wife. It's the way destiny intended it. Date written: 07/05/2020

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John Hamilton

Date: 7/9/2020 6:11:00 PM

Beautiful write Edward, sometimes it's not the right time, and, when the right time comes so does true love, glad you found yours, congrats on another win!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/9/2020 8:50:00 PM

Thank you very much, John:-)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/7/2020 3:40:00 PM

Back with congrats! I love this one :))) xomo!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/7/2020 4:58:00 PM

Thanks again, PT!:-) Peace and love!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/7/2020 2:44:00 PM

It is always best to let go of those past memories with gratitude and move on. You've beautifully expressed those emotions my friend. Congratulations on your win Edward :) Blessings!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/7/2020 3:13:00 PM

I couldn't agree more, Aditi:-) It's a very important life lesson. I appreciate the wonderful feedback, as always.

John Watt

Date: 7/7/2020 10:22:00 AM

I like your approach to this, Edward, as a thank you note. An acknowledgement that it was not meant to be and your life turned out even better. Congratulations on your win ~ John

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/7/2020 3:17:00 PM

Thanks, John:-) I wanted to take the theme in a slightly different direction, I'm glad you liked my take on it!