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To The One I Lost' Contest
Sponsor Anoucheka Gangabissoon

7/13/2023

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We both cared so much, you completed me, Evidently you were meant for me. Love persisted to manifest Although at the same time blessed, Till infinite heaven Called, and forgiven. I am driven Belonging Longing, Tears. Plead for closure of long years. Prey as feathers picked off, death fret, Like a scared bird, tangled in a net. You completed me, I cannot forget.

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Date: 9/7/2023 12:30:00 AM
Eve, so thankful i could embrace this award-winning poem & jts magnifigance. Heaven helps those who mourn. God bless you & hold your beloved.
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Date: 8/17/2023 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture/ending. So very sorry for your pain. May you be together again one day. Have a great day.............
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Date: 8/10/2023 4:33:00 AM
I'm so sorry Evie. To lose a husband or a wife when the relationship is strong is unimaginable and a very strong and bitter pill to swallow. Be strong as you always are my friend and one day in the future you will meet again! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer..
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Date: 7/15/2023 7:04:00 PM
Memories speak of grief--as you so well convey, Eve. Your words are deeply felt!
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Date: 7/15/2023 7:02:00 AM
Emotional and touching, Eve...
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Date: 7/14/2023 4:13:00 PM
wow, this is so emotive and precious, Eve. Best of luck in the contest
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Date: 7/14/2023 11:01:00 AM
So stirring and lovely, Eve. You have my deep sympathy. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 7/14/2023 8:34:00 AM
What an absolutely beautiful poem! You gave us this gem, a wonderful expression of true and pure love. A fav for me. God bless.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/14/2023 8:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, Robert. Many blessings bestowed to you my friend.
Date: 7/14/2023 5:21:00 AM
It tugs at my heart strings ! I can sense how deeply you feel . He will guide you from above. All the Best, dear Eve in the contest.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/14/2023 8:49:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend, for the loving compliment. Many blessings bestowed to you
Date: 7/14/2023 3:48:00 AM
Hi Eve, This is so well crafted and permeates with grief. I am so sorry for your loss.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/14/2023 8:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Nancy, for your wonderful compliment.
Date: 7/14/2023 3:06:00 AM
wow this is one of your very best poem Eve, it brought tears to my eyes. May I use it.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/14/2023 8:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend. Yes you may use it, I'll never say no to my friend. Many blessings bestowed to you
Date: 7/14/2023 2:25:00 AM
Beautiful. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/14/2023 8:51:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend. Many blessings bestowed to you
Date: 7/13/2023 11:27:00 AM
Nice poem, Nice and heartfelt. GL in contest.
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/14/2023 8:52:00 AM
Thank you so much and for the good luck.
Date: 7/13/2023 11:02:00 AM
- Beautiful and touching, Eve - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 7/14/2023 8:48:00 AM
Thank you so much, my friend. Many blessings bestowed to you

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