To the Niece That Never Was

Sweet little girl who snuck upon her mom
without plans already in place to meet,
you’re a tiny hero, a bitter balm
for the wound that left an empty car seat.
A routine visit that ended in tears,
and an operation for the next week.
My sister’s truth was a mother’s worst fear,
never to hold her babe, to stroke her cheek.

After the grim appointment, her eyes glazed
her heart rate jumped high, and her fever raised.
Illness would have stolen her, but for fate.
You had asked a favor at heaven’s gate.
Thank you for saving my sister, sweet one.
I wish though, it didn’t mean your life was done.

11/3/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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November 10, 2012 at 6:13 PM
BRITTANY, enjoyed seeing you on Craig's winning list.. always~ pd
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November 9, 2012 at 1:36 AM
Congratulations on you well deserved win Brittany xx
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November 8, 2012 at 3:04 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the "Loss" contest - / / Anne-Lise :)
Guzzi Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 2:31 PM
A powerful write.Congrad's on Your Win! Light & Love
Brown Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 10:39 AM
Congratulations on your win in Craig's "Loss" contest Brittany. Love, Carol
Roberts Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations ....So sad in my work I see this so much.....Seren
Ober Avatar
November 8, 2012 at 9:40 AM
This gave me goosebumps. Very sad, but beautifully written.
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November 3, 2012 at 9:45 PM
wonderful poem, love elizabeth
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