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To the Moon In the Sky

response poem to Moon and the Sky

a waif with tangled hair of blue
stared into the sky despondent 
covered in paint of a squeamish hue 
she yelled and squeaked at the goddess 
danced a tantrum sort of jig, stuck out her tongue
and bit it	

I want some joy the child demanded
in a voice both petulant and pained
the astronauts landed
and brought back some rocks
but I know 
there is more that remained.

each night you sit and stare at me
I never know the reason
on a silver swing hung over the sea 
in all weather and all seasons
but now I have had enough of you
peeking down upon me,

I’m going to find a lawyer and sue
for lots and lots of money.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/29/2017 6:52:00 AM
This tickled me peculiarly particularly :)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/29/2017 4:08:00 PM
OMG! didn't mean to be peculiar. Gotcha! yes I did it just leaked out. It was my disappointed five year old. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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