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To the Moon In the Sky

response poem to Moon and the Sky a waif with tangled hair of blue stared into the sky despondent covered in paint of a squeamish hue she yelled and squeaked at the goddess danced a tantrum sort of jig, stuck out her tongue and bit it I want some joy the child demanded in a voice both petulant and pained the astronauts landed and brought back some rocks but I know there is more that remained. each night you sit and stare at me I never know the reason on a silver swing hung over the sea in all weather and all seasons but now I have had enough of you peeking down upon me, I’m going to find a lawyer and sue for lots and lots of money.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/29/2017 3:56:00 PM
Hi Patricia , wonderful witty write great read my friend ::))))hugs
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/29/2017 4:10:00 PM
Well when you are five you gets to say things grups can't. Thanks.
Date: 8/29/2017 6:52:00 AM
This tickled me peculiarly particularly :)
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Patricia Cresswell
Date: 8/29/2017 4:08:00 PM
OMG! didn't mean to be peculiar. Gotcha! yes I did it just leaked out. It was my disappointed five year old. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Book: Shattered Sighs