To the Day Comes a Way of Setting

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Paul Gustave Ficher (Danish painter) 1860 - 1934 Morning in the Artist's Home at Sofievej 1913 Via Rosella Biscuso

Written 8/11/2023

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Evergreens show the season change it claims.
Timely appearance of golden sunshine
Filtering quenches ripen Autumn wine.
Through window, white sheer curtains ivy frames.

Beneath, pots of Peace Lily and ferns stand.
Still of bright colour, expansive decor
On Mahogany polished wooden floor.
Ornate lamp and lampshade on baby grand.

Their noble lives to be flawless, mincing
Mannerism infused with poetic words.
Choral music of the lively cage birds
Simply most surprisingly convincing.

By the end of day their bruise feet are sore,
Tomorrow, they open their mind to more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/25/2023 6:15:00 PM
I see this is a winner.
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Date: 9/1/2023 5:04:00 PM
Eve, Congratulations on winning my contest with your beautifully written poem. Your poem is filled with deep thoughts and vivid descriptions, which brings the imagery to life.
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Date: 9/1/2023 4:54:00 PM
Congrats, Eve. Love your reading
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Date: 9/1/2023 2:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. I enjoyed it. Have a great day.............
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