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To the Best Man In This Life of Her

In the darkness of a rising hole, there came the flash, liting up her eyes, as she went to it She saw the same man carrying tons of veggies to sell, for he needed to give her some notebooks to hold The man seemed to be a close relative to the owls, Staying awake the same as them Nowhere to be seen except for the time when she needed him The moments were there, when he held her hand so tight, refusing to quit in the battle of life Being the best man in this life of her, she pleads to hold him in her eyes as always, For this existence means a void without him

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Date: 3/11/2022 8:14:00 AM
"close relative to the owls, Staying awake the same as them", "this existence means a void without him" - Whole poem is beautiful.
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Subasree Gunasekaran
Date: 3/11/2022 11:51:00 PM
Thanks a lot for commenting!!
Date: 12/21/2021 1:42:00 AM
How wonderful to have someone we can count on.
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Subasree Gunasekaran
Date: 12/21/2021 5:04:00 AM
True !! Thanks for commenting

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