To the Atheist

That
you could
be born and
then die without
real purpose is not
an ideology 
I can believe in. Too much
of creation’s orderliness
and beauty is proof of this to me.
Have you never felt an inner knowing?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
September 23, 2018 at 11:55 PM
Bravo. Another win, Andrea.
Toney Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 11:41 PM
Andrea, an excellent write! Congratulations on your first place finish. ~Mark
Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 8:58 PM
Great take on the challenge, Andrea. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.
Carber Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 3:44 PM
I share your sentiments 100%, Andrea-- congrats on your win too!
Haight Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 9:08 AM
A beautifully expressed 'inner knowing', Andrea, and I agree with you wholeheartedly. Congrats First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Babcock Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 7:06 PM
Happy Birthday sweet Andrea. Have a lovely day. A very meaningful poem and a awesome write. love phyl
Hamilton Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 2:51 PM
I think we all know...just a matter of how we want to live...or not. Great write Andrea!
Sefunmi Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Very strong inner knowing indeed! It is so refreshing reading through your poems again.
Wood Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 1:40 PM
This is spot on Andrea. I never could buy into that idea that we crawled out of the primordial ooze and overcame chaos on our own. A well written entry! Good Luck!
Kendrick Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 11:32 AM
Good that you know that and accept the fact. There is no just happened in God's plan if only we would be in touch so we could know what He has for us. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Anish Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 9:25 AM
Nice mystical poem here! Good luck in the contest. I saw Anastasia on Broadway and after the show when I went to get an autograph from the star she blew me a kiss!! I am going to see Wicked on Broadway on Sunday! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Carber Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 8:55 AM
I very much agree, Andrea-- that inner knowing is only found in the human species, and so there must be a reason why.
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 6:50 AM
Very deep and meaningful..well said, Andrea.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 5:20 AM
I agree! GL in contest!
Cunningham Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 3:29 AM
Life is a giant jigsaw , hopefully we all fit in somewhere. Like you say, you have that inner knowing. Good luck. Tom
B. Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 8:26 PM
An absolutely beautiful etheree, Andrea.. Such truth with wise words, my friend.. Many blessings!!
Michael Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 8:09 PM
Same here...no matter to what I attribute it to...it's a knowing...Nice Etheree...Would like to do one...
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