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To Suffer Quietly

Standing in the hall with his sword and his shield Trying to recall his glory in the field He sees that peace is not all it is said to be And he's learning now to suffer quietly Friendship, sweat n' blood, there was a mortal fear It was brotherly love and without a single tear Oh, the angel of death you could hear her wings Right now there seems to be no real need for anything I could wish nothing more vile on my closest enemy Than to turn back, recover his tracks and to suffer quietly Slave to the mundane such as no other animal Deluded he lays claim to the incompatible Haunted by the facts, confronted in his shame It's a life on the run through a carnival of pain Coerced by the wily fools that he must serve Do harm unto your neighbor, plunder the earth N' With no other option than to guard his patch And Orpheus , he gave word there's no looking back There is no comfort to be found in abject misery n' Forever is a very long time to while away cowardly I could wish nothing more vile on my closest enemy Than to turn back, recover his tracks and to suffer quietly

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Date: 4/19/2015 4:29:00 AM
"I could wish nothing more vile on my closest enemy Than to turn back, recover his tracks and to suffer quietly" ...I must quote you again... because I find this line among very others...brilliant. I am no critic, I am no professional , though I feel so much reading your work... I am very impressed. Your style stands out. Your words are both, beautiful, and intriguing. Always, Laura
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Rightly Jennings
Date: 4/20/2015 4:39:00 AM
Thank you Laura. I'm happy my poems work for you.
Date: 3/27/2015 7:32:00 PM
This type of rhyme is called Couplet form, very well done. The type of rhyme you are using is called slant rhyme or half rhyme VERY nice! Suggestions here would be again consider periods at the end of thoughts, and check the word THAT many time the word is not needed at all ;). Light & Love
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Rightly Jennings
Date: 3/27/2015 9:31:00 PM
Part 2. The word that - I dunno, it's sometimes useful when performing, catching a breath, useful for the structure of delivery. I'm almost completely ignorant of the terminology of poetry. I appreciate any tips you can give me. Thanks!
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Rightly Jennings
Date: 3/27/2015 9:30:00 PM
Hi, again. Well Y'know these here are all lyrics to my songs. I think the lyrics are composed well enough to stand without music, I think they're poems. Some of them are autobiographic, this one isn't. Sometimes the music to them is quirky n difficult to play live. Here I was venting my irritation with soldiers getting reffered to as heroes, I've known a few n I've not met one hero amongst them.

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