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To Sit Forlornly Is To Perpetuate In the Dawn:

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Come hither youth and heed the words I say, My heart does yearn as I now reminisce, If not for you where would I be today? As I sit forlornly avoid from bliss. Let me ask you was it all worth your while? Did you live proudly with love in the end? Or would you exchange it all for a smile? Tell me youth did you at least make a friend? Now as the years went by do I seem old? My youth please know in the mirror I see, You standing there with reflection so cold, Your eyes no wiser than they used to be. All your dreams have died and hang in the sky, Leaving me alone to wither and die.

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L. J. Carber

Date: 5/11/2017 2:54:00 PM

Having just passed the big 70, I can well relate to your well=penned theme. I wrote a poem along similar lines whilst pondering how the old swallow their own youth (though how well we digest it seems to vary).

White Wolf
Date: 5/11/2017 4:34:00 PM

Thank you for your kind visit, Len! I appreciate it /|\

Joseph May

Date: 5/10/2017 10:13:00 PM

Beautiful yet sad...Congrats on your win

White Wolf
Date: 5/10/2017 10:16:00 PM

Thank you very much, Joseph /|\

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/10/2017 9:56:00 PM

Congrats on this fine sonnet!

White Wolf
Date: 5/10/2017 10:01:00 PM

Thank you, Kim /|\

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/8/2017 8:30:00 PM

A golden nugget this is my friend.. I love every verses and the flow and message are tops. Closing verses are perfect summation. Are we going to see a part two to this gem? Hope so my friend..A7 and a fav..

White Wolf
Date: 5/8/2017 10:14:00 PM

mmm, part 2 hey! I'll think about that one actually! Great to see you again, Robert! Have a wonderful day my friend /|\

Miraj Raha

Date: 5/8/2017 10:50:00 AM

Oh this is so sad and true WW, we all miss our youth and its adventures but we can live it through our children.

White Wolf
Date: 5/8/2017 5:27:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, Miraj /|\

Tim Smith

Date: 5/8/2017 8:01:00 AM

Great self pondering my friend...how did we get so old?

White Wolf
Date: 5/8/2017 8:08:00 AM

I KNOW!!! The days just fly by now! Cheers, Tim /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/8/2017 7:20:00 AM

Profound writing, worthy messages, excellent poem dear, WW! A 7!

White Wolf
Date: 5/8/2017 7:23:00 AM

Thank you kindly, Demetrios /|\ Enjoy your night

Chris Green

Date: 5/8/2017 6:58:00 AM

Life is filled with questions, pretty much, what if come heavily into play the older we get. What if we had done this differently? Nicely expressed Rick. I can see this play out, the old man looking back on his past, regretting many things while still questioning himself as to is he happy with the outcome. Very cool.

White Wolf
Date: 5/8/2017 7:06:00 AM

Yeah, I agree! This one I came up with the title first and built the sonnet around it! It did come out a bit gloomy though, thanks mate /|\

Just James

Date: 5/8/2017 6:14:00 AM

Lovely self perspective, very clever. Love it when intellect meets art!

White Wolf
Date: 5/8/2017 6:22:00 AM

Thank you so kindly, JJ /|\

Darren White

Date: 5/8/2017 5:57:00 AM

That is a beautiful sonnet Budgie, I like the somewhat archaic language a lot. It IS a bit sad, I say stay around and teach the youngsters :)

White Wolf
Date: 5/8/2017 6:02:00 AM

Haha, thanks penguin /|\