To See Ourselves As Others See Us

To See Ourselves As Others See Us

By Elton Camp

What we’re like we may think we know
Others very well might not agree, though

For in my mirror I see a kindly old goat
But others a different conclusion may note

Then there’s Sue who thinks she’s a looker
Perhaps others say, “Hey, there goes a hooker.”

Teenage Bob considers himself a laid-back dude
While others may find him foul-mouthed & rude

The candidate thinks that he is sure to be elected
The public may have his grievous faults detected

The country singer is certain that her voice is grand
But to the cultured ear, it may be too hard to stand

The professor may believe that his lectures are clear
But students may warn others never to come near

The waitress seems to believe that her service is great
The customers, to sit at her tables, may intensely hate

If others’ views we could somehow come to see
From many a foolish conceit it might set us free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Northeast Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 4:15 AM
You are hitting the buttons Elton- great, Brenda : )
Bauer Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 3:07 PM
this is very true and well said! i enjoyed it!
Andresen Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 3:05 PM
Smile.....and the mirror smile back to you Elton, very well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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