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To Sail Seven Seas

The first water bed Sammy sees he says he is going to seize. He believes on this bed, when he lays down his head, in dreams he will sail seven seas! Posted March 23 for a contest judged March 2016 Now used for The Second Chance #2 Poetry Contest of Broken Wings

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Date: 4/17/2018 6:27:00 PM
LOL good limerick, Andrea.
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Date: 4/27/2016 11:22:00 PM
ANDREA, Congratulations on your "Second Chance #2 WIN." Love LINDA
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Date: 4/23/2016 4:21:00 PM
I can relate to Sammy. Who doesn't love to rock and sway on the water of life?
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Date: 4/19/2016 10:31:00 AM
Andrea, congrats on your placement in the second chance contest! very well written lady :)-luloo
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Date: 4/4/2016 12:21:00 PM
LOL, the best way to see them
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Date: 3/26/2016 7:13:00 AM
Enjoyed reading this one today..My mother-in-law said the first time she saw the ocean, "Now that is a large body of water"..The reason behind that was that they always said about a lake where they lived growing, "Now that is a large body of water"..Except they actually called that small lake a mill pond..Sara
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Date: 3/25/2016 4:44:00 PM
lol good one, andrea! the limerick form is ideal for wordplay...i think this stands a better chance than mine, i just saw his update about wanting humorous ones! ah well...
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Date: 3/25/2016 12:51:00 PM
Ha ha dream it may happen but after waking up surely he will feel loneliness. Much loved your limerick. Wish you good luck my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 3/25/2016 2:20:00 AM
You do well in his contests Andrea, as I am sure this one will do. I have written one Limerick in my life. They are too difficult to master for me. This is another great one! GL :)
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Date: 3/25/2016 12:16:00 AM
So cute!!!
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Date: 3/24/2016 9:13:00 PM
Andrea, love your play on words, great for the contest... 7 ~
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Date: 3/24/2016 7:21:00 PM
Nothing to sneeze (at) and may it appease (the judge that is).
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Date: 3/24/2016 7:13:00 PM
Aren't you the smartee pants? Great word play. Peace my friend:)
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Date: 3/24/2016 6:46:00 PM
Very clever Andrea...nicely penned
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Date: 3/24/2016 6:27:00 PM
fantastic wordplay, andie!.. will send note soon-- been hopping around.. huggs!
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Date: 3/24/2016 5:33:00 PM
great word play Andrea good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 3/24/2016 4:09:00 PM
- A great one, Andrea - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/24/2016 3:39:00 PM
This is bring memories of the nursery rhyme song...the sailor went to see see see what he could see see see...nice one Andrea
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