To Restore Your Equilibrium

Dearest Elizabeth
so sorry for to hear
of your dreadful plight
to my eyes brings a tear

A shocking thing to happen
just out of the blue
so sending good vibes
upon a moonbeam for you

Just spoken to Aunt Liz
who gave a comprehensive overview
she said your pain is so severe
if only we could come and help
relieve your pain
and wipe your tears
if only we could help you dear
by being there
by being near

I'm sure dear Bryan
and sweet daughter too
plus Catherine and friends
will look after you

In the meantime dearest Lizzie
keep your mind and soul busy
try to focus on your pain
visualizing as it leaves your body
to return from whence it came

Each day 
as your strength 
and your spirit is gained 
you will start to feel good
get back to normal again

I know your spirits strong
belief in Angels for so long
so call them up sweet poet
to restore your equilibrium
as one by one the
Angels
send your pain into oblivion
and before too long
you’ll begin to feel
healthy ~ fit ~ and oh so strong…

Written 8th August 2019 - may these words lift you high, up into to the sky…

Written for a dear friend and poet after a very nasty fall...

4th PLACE
Contest: Writing Challenge 1, August 2019 - Just Write
Sponsor: Dear Heart

Contest 'Brian's Select 1
Sponsor Brian Strand
3rd Place
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Kinch  Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations Ann on another winning write xx
Gilmour Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 11:19 AM
Thank you Elizabeth for your congrats, hoping each day is better than the last! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Cunningham Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 2:44 AM
Back with congratulations Anne, I didn't realise she was on soup. Im glad it gave her a boost. Tom.
Gilmour Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 10:50 AM
Yes Elizabeth has written some amazing poems Tom, so maybe visit them when you get a moment, although she has not been active for a while. She is the niece of my best friend and a beautiful human being. Thanks for the congrats Tom . With kindest thoughts Ann xx
La France Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 7:39 PM
Ann congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write
Gilmour Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 10:52 AM
Thank you so much for my place in your contest Constance, and for your sponsorship and your time. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Kinch  Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 5:55 AM
Aww Ann it's so lovely to know people are thinking of me after my annoying accident. Friends and family have been so kind and I certainly have been calling on my angels. You dear Ann are definitely an angel on earth, your poem has lifted my spirits and your 'Celebrate your wobbly bits' gave me the best medicine ever - laughter. Thank you dearest Ann xxx
Gilmour Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 8:38 AM
I was so upset when I heard of your accident Elizabeth, I really wanted to give you a hug, so by writing this poem for you it was like I was sending you a virtual hug.Thank you so much for your lovely comments, bless you sweet girl. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Pandit Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 7:37 AM
So caring..so heartfelt..you are a great friend and a human being, Ann..it shows in your soothing words.
Gilmour Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 7:41 AM
Oh Vijay such a beautiful comment you have made, I thank you dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Romios Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 3:12 AM
A truly lovely write, Anne! It exposes, once again yout tenderness for your fellow man. " so sending good vibes on a moonbeam to you." sheer poetic beauty., Love, Panagiota
Gilmour Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 3:23 AM
Bless you my dear friend Panagiota and for your lovely comments I thank you. So looking forward to those moonbeams! With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Cunningham Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 2:02 AM
A beautiful verse Ann, I hope that your friend soon makes a speedy recovery. Tom
Gilmour Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 2:30 AM
Thank you so much Tom for your kind wishes. I trust all is well with you and yours; always good to hear from you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 6:01 PM
so sorry to hear your friend is unwell, sounds like she has a lovely family to care for her and a souper friend to write uplifting poems to boost her spirits:-) hugs Jan xx
Gilmour Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 6:08 PM
Oh thanks Jan she is such a lovely girl and has taken such an awful tumble, bless her. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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