Nette Onclaud Poet Diminished Hexaverse

To Reap Hope

A wasteland of dreams
creates more angst
when night starts to dim,
to drain hollow trails
pinching my bruised chest.

Yet, I shall take
my will’s new flight
and burn candles
seeking life’s grail.

In my world…
fervor roams;
bathed by trust

gently 
reaping

hope!






Dr. Ram's Diminished Hexaverse
Theme: Hope
by nette onclaud

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Kayod5 Kayode January 21, 2015 at 11:49 PM Congrats nette...huggs

Sara Kendrick January 20, 2015 at 4:29 PM !!! ((())) Way to go ……Sara

James Fraser January 20, 2015 at 1:04 PM Nice, very nice Nette. Congratulations on your fine poetry and it's win in Dr. Rams contest, hugs, James :)x

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty January 20, 2015 at 11:10 AM Congratulations nette> love-rajat

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 19, 2015 at 10:23 PM How lovely is ur write Nette! Congrats on fine win!

Sandra Haight January 19, 2015 at 5:26 PM Hi Nette, stopping back to congratulate your on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra

Jan Allison January 19, 2015 at 12:33 PM Powerfully penned Nette - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr.Ram Mehta January 19, 2015 at 11:11 AM Congrats on the win in my contest and thanks for the participation

Eve Roper January 19, 2015 at 10:48 AM Nette, congratulations on your win, good write.

Brenda Meier-Hans January 19, 2015 at 10:13 AM Wonderfully written Nette. Congratulations on your win.

Paul Callus January 16, 2015 at 3:44 PM Well done Nette! Positivity flows, based on hope; those who trust will surely reap joy! Like how you moved on from dark to light. A winning poem...no doubt! hugs // paul

Cherl Dunn January 13, 2015 at 1:02 PM BAM is is a truly awesome work, enjoyed every line of it, great job! cheri

Monterey Sirak January 13, 2015 at 7:19 AM Fantastic. Love the pivotal word 'yet' in the second stanza. It tells us all is not lost.

Liam Mcdaid January 12, 2015 at 6:55 AM beautifully painted nette excellent piece dear pal

Debbie Guzzi January 11, 2015 at 3:02 PM Nice choice nette, luck in the contest. Light & Love

Emile Pinet January 9, 2015 at 7:05 PM Your words fill the heart and roll gently off the tongue drifting quietly into memory. Emile

Norma Arana January 9, 2015 at 3:58 PM With an opening line--wasteland of dreams-- I just had to finish this powerful poem with a wonderful feel of hope and joy rising. I love the way you've put this together, brilliantly done!

Sandra Haight January 8, 2015 at 4:21 PM Very powerful words, Nette. I really like your profound message here. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Banjo Casto January 8, 2015 at 5:48 AM Nette, I like the relentless strength of this poem. Very uplifting and flowing. Bravo!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 8, 2015 at 4:21 AM - You excited many with your beautiful words, it is beautiful joy ! - Thank you my friend Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)