To Raise Cain or Do That Which I Am Abel

Outside my window, the sun smiled. 
No sirens screamed and no explosions resounded.
No tearful wails interrupted my serenity.
This, I thought, must be peace - 
As long as I ignored the news.

Nobody tore me from my bed,
Bruised my skin,
Nor forced water down my throat.
My human rights, intact -
A privilege of my distance.

Ahhhh!
My cocoa tasted as sweet as my innocence 
from the cradle of my recliner.
Why borrow trouble?
Am I my brother’s keeper?

My skin frosted as my heart shivered.
A cold thought formed.
The quote echoed a ghostly reminder from whom that question originated.
A chilling realization that hiding was actively choosing
to raise Cain.

Where was the chaos sown?
Where were the voices stilled?
I must not sit, I must not wait!
Comfort must be sacrificed,
before I also found that I had become the one who was not Abel.
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 5:19 PM
Wow! Magnificent!! This line says it all: A chilling realization that hiding was actively choosing to raise Cain. enjoyed the biblical reference and the depth of your words. Faving
Sidwell Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 8:25 AM
Thank you Sara!
George Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 1:36 AM
'Am l my brother's keeper'... this question has risen from Abel long ago. But unfortunately it keeps rising from all of us. We do not bother about another's suffering as long as we are in a comfort zone. A remarkable composition dear Robert.
Sidwell Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 9:01 AM
Thank you Valsa! I appreciate your insightful comments.
Rose  Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 4:05 AM
This is a great play on words dear Robert, an introspective poem that speaks volumes about the Caine and Abel in all of us. Thank you for sharing your talent have a great day !
Sidwell Avatar
November 8, 2025 at 1:05 PM
Thank you Mystic Rose!!
Wolf Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 6:51 PM
A great man once told me that if one man (Hitler) could kill 6 million Jews, then surely 14 million Jews (the approximate number alive today) can take down the Ayatollah of Iran AND Mr. Putin. That man is right, but we have to be united first.
Sidwell Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 8:40 AM
I hope I am wrong, but it seems so easy to fan the flames of hate and so much work to build coalitions of good. I appreciate your visits Gershon!
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 3:19 PM
So profound. I really like this and how you played with the Cain and Abel references. Well done!
Sidwell Avatar
November 7, 2025 at 8:45 AM
Thank you Andrea! I really appreciate your comments.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 1:43 PM
We have to keep a balance. We watch the news for updates, turn it off, read the Word, pray and let God move.
Sidwell Avatar
November 6, 2025 at 2:52 PM
I agree, balance. We don’t want to become obsessed with the news and we can’t solve everything. However, we can do something and it will matter :). Thanks for commenting and visiting!
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