To One Inside

As I lay watching the stars colliding Through the universe so pretty and vast Past and present enveloped are portrayed Colloquy within the rhythm of the… Of the gracious, likeable beating heart Openness of peace, openness of realms Calming to be, righteous act of longing Welcoming riverbeds as well the skies The beating informed internal grand soul What a simple and interesting life Living for the bass of musical rhyme Proud to be over here, having a soul Jumping into life’s loving lava flow She becomes part of my integration Allowing a peace of mind to enter Brought a palm of simplicity to me World on my shoulders, a love in my heart Delight to always be divine in part You shower me with the grace of power Immensity of all single forces… To one inside
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Posey Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 7:02 PM
Russell, It's work like this that will keep one always near the top of the winners list... congrats on a real poem.... Jake
Gasun Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 8:47 AM
Big hearty congratulations on your well-deserved super win my dear friend, Russell. I extremely enjoyed this great piece of yours. Cheers! Thank you so much for sharing! love lots, Leonora
Kendrick Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 7:25 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Great job..Sara
A  Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 1:50 PM
epic, Russell, congrats :-] -Skat
Anglesey Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 10:36 AM
Russell, Very soothing and inspirational elegance. Congrats on your win :)
Delaney Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 10:24 AM
Gracious, calming, at one with nature and love....all the winning elements I love in a poem. Congratulations
Konos Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 6:02 AM
Congratulations
Lamoureux Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations Russell, well done.
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July 5, 2013 at 11:05 PM
wow! .... congratulations... from:Linda
Horne Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 4:50 PM
great work here, my friend. Hope you are having an excellent week
Esquire Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 4:00 PM
Dear Russell, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. I feel so at peace after reading this Poetic Master Piece. Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on my last Post LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Liege...Harry
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July 3, 2013 at 1:34 PM
Russell; this is very good . I love your last stanza. Thanks for sharing....... Lucilla
Onclaud Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 10:54 AM
Gracious line fill this page with such dexterity, russell... i like this one:' Welcoming riverbeds as well the skies..'... you paint a divine picture... well done!..:) huggs
Kendrick Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 8:41 AM
Great work expressing calmness and serenity..Enjoyed reading your uniquely creative work this morn..Thanks for your visit..The humidity is high here so much so that even with the air on it presses in..Sara
Chircop Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 6:14 AM
This poem fills me with the calm beauty of serenity..So wonderful to read it.. this afternoon-
Lamoureux Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 5:58 AM
Way to go Russell, have a majestic day.
Haick Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 10:34 PM
A stunning gem, Russell! No doubt written from the heart! Enjoyed! Always, Annalise
Jones Avatar
July 2, 2013 at 9:37 PM
What a simple and interesting life..love this line Russell...nice poem all together...have a great holiday...
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