To Never Wake

"I dreamt, I was a butterfly or was I, a butterfly dreaming...."

~ With regal grace of a Swan, I dance amid dew drops. Where enfolds a dream slipped by, one each in a sweet Tulip. ~ Within this field of flowers, beckons all that could be. All the entrancing beauty, steeped, in wishes mystique. ~ Their subtle scent enrapturing, of my drifting,sensibilities. Enticing me to believe, each bloom could be reality. ~ The enchanting pull is silken, as cool water, on sun kissed skin. A delightful feel of welcome, from each bloom, as I peer in. ~ I chance to sip the sweetness, from a velvet petaled cup. The vibrant hue I tasted, a dream I had given up. ~ Fascinating, how time will fly, within the stage of REM sleep. A captivating thrall I need, within a dream I want to keep.
Paula Swanson 7/10/2011 For the contest: Day Dreams and Dreams and Dreams Sponsored by Constance La France Placement: 1st

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Date: 8/28/2011 11:17:00 AM
Vivid and ornate imagery Paula. My most favorite line...number 1. Congratulations! CR
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Date: 7/18/2011 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in the contest of Constance La France "Day Dreams and dreams and dreams" Love, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2011 1:35:00 PM
Many congrats on your wins, Paula : )
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Date: 7/16/2011 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations Paula on your first place win with this beautiful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 7/15/2011 9:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great poem. Lee
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Date: 7/15/2011 9:25:00 PM
Dear Paula, Congratulations on YOUR well Deserved 1st Place WIN in Constance's Contest A Captivating Write from Begining to End I Enjoy Reading YOU with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...HG
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Date: 7/15/2011 8:35:00 PM
Congrats on your win...
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Paula Swanson
Date: 7/15/2011 8:50:00 PM
Thank you Juanita
Date: 7/15/2011 7:54:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Paula, Many congrats on your SUPER FIRST PLACE WIN, Lainie
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Paula Swanson
Date: 7/15/2011 8:51:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 7/15/2011 6:37:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS! a real wonderful write that deserves a big round of applause...superb and real fantastic.....*-^ junjun
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:04:00 PM
congrats Paula on another great first place win for a first class poem my friend..luv..
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Date: 7/15/2011 5:48:00 PM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest , Paula
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Date: 7/15/2011 5:26:00 PM
perfect verse for the contest! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 7/11/2011 7:53:00 PM
beautiful poem..I love the last verse..Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/11/2011 1:14:00 PM
I look forward to going to sleep each night so that i may dream. this dream contest is a great ideal, yours was top notch. enjoyed it.
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Date: 7/11/2011 8:27:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Paula. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/11/2011 12:41:00 AM
good thing i caught this today, paula... beguiling me with impressions that flow so naturally... blooms a- winning! :) huggs
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Date: 7/10/2011 7:45:00 PM
now your talking philosophy a whole different subject. john
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Date: 7/10/2011 7:20:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one. Good job, Paula. Take care. Dana'lynn
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