To Never Wake

"I dreamt, I was a butterfly or was I, a butterfly dreaming...."

~ With regal grace of a Swan, I dance amid dew drops. Where enfolds a dream slipped by, one each in a sweet Tulip. ~ Within this field of flowers, beckons all that could be. All the entrancing beauty, steeped, in wishes mystique. ~ Their subtle scent enrapturing, of my drifting,sensibilities. Enticing me to believe, each bloom could be reality. ~ The enchanting pull is silken, as cool water, on sun kissed skin. A delightful feel of welcome, from each bloom, as I peer in. ~ I chance to sip the sweetness, from a velvet petaled cup. The vibrant hue I tasted, a dream I had given up. ~ Fascinating, how time will fly, within the stage of REM sleep. A captivating thrall I need, within a dream I want to keep.
Paula Swanson 7/10/2011 For the contest: Day Dreams and Dreams and Dreams Sponsored by Constance La France Placement: 1st
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Ramsdale Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 11:17 AM
Vivid and ornate imagery Paula. My most favorite line...number 1. Congratulations! CR
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July 18, 2011 at 7:28 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in the contest of Constance La France "Day Dreams and dreams and dreams" Love, Carol
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July 16, 2011 at 1:35 PM
Many congrats on your wins, Paula : )
Muzzey Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 9:29 AM
Congratulations Paula on your first place win with this beautiful write. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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July 15, 2011 at 9:30 PM
Congratulations on your win. Great poem. Lee
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July 15, 2011 at 9:25 PM
Dear Paula, Congratulations on YOUR well Deserved 1st Place WIN in Constance's Contest A Captivating Write from Begining to End I Enjoy Reading YOU with LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...HG
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July 15, 2011 at 8:35 PM
Congrats on your win...
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July 15, 2011 at 8:50 PM
Thank you Juanita
George   Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 7:54 PM
Beautiful poem, Paula, Many congrats on your SUPER FIRST PLACE WIN, Lainie
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July 15, 2011 at 8:51 PM
Thank you
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July 15, 2011 at 6:37 PM
CONGRATULATIONS! a real wonderful write that deserves a big round of applause...superb and real fantastic.....*-^ junjun
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July 15, 2011 at 6:04 PM
congrats Paula on another great first place win for a first class poem my friend..luv..
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July 15, 2011 at 5:48 PM
My congratulations on the first place win in the contest , Paula
Guzzi Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 5:26 PM
perfect verse for the contest! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Warden Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 7:53 PM
beautiful poem..I love the last verse..Good luck in the contest.
Foulk Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 1:14 PM
I look forward to going to sleep each night so that i may dream. this dream contest is a great ideal, yours was top notch. enjoyed it.
Brown Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 8:27 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Paula. I enjoyed reading it this lovely morning. May you have a wonderful week and enjoy life to the fullest. Love, Carol
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July 11, 2011 at 12:41 AM
good thing i caught this today, paula... beguiling me with impressions that flow so naturally... blooms a- winning! :) huggs
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July 10, 2011 at 7:45 PM
now your talking philosophy a whole different subject. john
Smith Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 7:20 PM
I really enjoyed this one. Good job, Paula. Take care. Dana'lynn
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