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To My Void

Blood shot and swollen, my eyes open. I am now awake, to face the world in turmoil. I try in vain to organize my life. Getting out of bed, I travel the short distance between that and the bathroom that I share with the other residents. I look into the mirror and realize how life's traumas has brought me nearer to my closure. So I return to my room, to my bed, to my void.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/16/2010 12:36:00 PM
this is a great piece of poetry art i loved it! well i loved the whole thing but my favorite part was the first stanza and then poem ending line was very effective. =)jo
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Date: 11/24/2009 4:35:00 AM
Wonderful poetry you present to us today Sheol. I hope your week finds you with an overflow of inspiration which you may use to inspire others. Love and blessings to you, Carol
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