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To My Soul Companion

I saw gold,i forgot the sparkle of silver. I saw a diamond, i forgot the glitter of gold. I saw stars, i forgot the shine of diamonds. And I saw you and i am lost in the world of forgetfulness. I tasted sugar,it was sweet I tasted honey,it was sweeter I tasted nectar,it was the sweetest And i heard your voice and i don't know whether the sweetest thing is a sound or a taste. I felt the breeze, when it rained. It's the best i thought. I felt an infant's touch. The breeze hung it's head in shame. I felt my heartbeat How much far can this get? And then i felt you. This feeling in me stays forever.

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Date: 8/20/2024 5:28:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/10/2018 7:27:00 AM
Love it
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Date: 10/10/2018 3:45:00 AM
withing pure and innocent soul everyone can feel the great soul companion////
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Date: 8/1/2018 11:36:00 PM
The rhythm of this poem was wonderful. I liked the way you brought in the feeling sense as a replacement for all of the others.
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