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Years go by and memories dim and fade Many, once so close and familiar are gone Most of them have faded into oblivion But those of whom one can never forget, stay on Oh, dear Appa (Dad) and Amma (Mom) in Heaven As the days of Christmas draw near, memories parade Not in an orderly queue, but in a jumbled mass And your loving faces, before our eyes, flash, and fade. Leaving inerasable memories, you departed in silence. When sick or unwell you always wrapped us up in prayer Now you stay in a place untouched by stain or strain. From there, you watch over us with tender care. When festive days arrive, we miss you so badly Though days and years pass, we feel you so near But we know, you cannot come down from your sphere To be with us on this day to give us cheer So, transcending the boundaries of space and time Our hearts rise high to your loving presence Where you stay secure from all sadness and sorrow And abide with your Heavenly Father in perpetual jubilance We see you celebrating Christmas with Jesus Along with the ethereal throng in great joy and mirth Kneeling by the throne surrounded by angels and seraphs Listening to their celestial choir, glorifying the holy birth On this festive day, we send you warm Christmas wishes Wrapped in memories of the times we were so deeply loved With loads of gratitude for the warmth you gave to last a lifetime With an assurance that we will live up to the ideals you avowed Though gone, every day we feel your presence, Especially when lonely and lost, unable to find our way. At the rim of the far-flung sky, we see you as two stars, Blazing our path with the trail of light you shed on our way! _______________________________ (My parents made a compatible pair Being together for long 57 years, as man and wife Far from perfect, yet complementary they fared. One’s weakness compensated by the other’s strength One’s rigidness indemnified by the other’s light heartedness Graced with a rich sprinkle of compassion and piety, With their strict adherence to the lofty ideals of life, They set the solid foundation for our value system.) _____________________________ Dec. 12. 2022 ~Placed Second~ Christmas in Heaven Poetry Contest Sponsor. B.J. Legros Kelley

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Date: 12/31/2022 10:48:00 PM
"transcending the boundaries of space and time Our hearts rise high to your loving presence" - A very beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 12/31/2022 1:11:00 PM
Merry Christmas Valsa, and congratulations on your high-placing win! Your poem is beautiful, and your parents sound so precious and wonderful. I love the photo of them that I can see now <3 Thank you for sharing them with us in the contest, Merry Christmas and a very blessed New Year for you and yours <3
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Date: 12/31/2022 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a lovely write/picture. Happy New Year 2023................
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Date: 12/31/2022 6:25:00 AM
You have penned a beautiful tribute to your parents! Congratulations on your well deserved win!!
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Date: 12/13/2022 3:01:00 PM
Amazing piece on amazing Father and Mother, yes parent remain proud on witnessing their legacy sharing in the dedicated path of life. though physically not with us I like you know they watch over us....nicely done
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Date: 12/13/2022 9:27:00 PM
Thanks a lot Weston for your highly encouraging comment. I am glad I got an opportunity to project my parents as an example of abiding marital bonding at a time when marriage is viewed as an anachronism by the new gen.
Date: 12/13/2022 11:40:00 AM
this is so precious. It's like me and Joe. OUr personalities are so totally different that one's flaws are another's strengths. This is so wonderful
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Date: 12/13/2022 9:23:00 PM
You are outgoing and adventurous. But Joe must be reserved and calm..... I guess ! Marriage is a game where mostly opposites meet, but still forming a complementary union. Thanks a lot Andrea....
Date: 12/13/2022 3:57:00 AM
I would like to read this at my poetry reading at the church with your permission, you will be mentioned as the author of course. thankyou for gracing my heart today dear friend. xo
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Date: 12/13/2022 9:20:00 PM
Rose, for me it definitely is an honor. It will be honoring my parents too. I try hard to emulate their example in my married life, but wonder if I have succeeded even 50 percent. Thanks a lot.
Date: 12/12/2022 2:32:00 PM
Love this dedication what a cute couple and amazing job they done raising you, 57 years of marriage is really great as you said one weakness compensated by the others strength, this is dedication in keeping your family together they continuously set a loving environment for you all,. Love them and you
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Date: 12/13/2022 9:16:00 PM
Thank you so much Stephan. They were in many respects an ideal couple. Their tolerance and sense of sacrifice are lessening with every succeeding generation.
Date: 12/12/2022 8:08:00 AM
I miss mine today more so with the added years of their passing (26,24 years). I thank God that most of my memories are good ones. Thank you for sharing this one and for dropping by my pages. Sara
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Date: 12/13/2022 9:13:00 PM
Yes, Sara we miss our parents especially on festive seasons when the family comes together. Thanks a lot for your kind visit and comment !
Date: 12/12/2022 5:57:00 AM
Valsa, you did an excellent job honoring your mum and dad. Their essence, however, will always remain with you in the form of memories and representations that bring them to mind. When you look back and recall dear ones that are no longer with you, it may be rather emotional.
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Date: 12/12/2022 8:05:00 AM
Though both of them lived a full life span, their parting left a vacuum and loads of memories. The pain is gone, but longing for them remains. Thank you so much dear Lasaad.
Date: 12/12/2022 5:54:00 AM
Heavenly poem straight from your heart, Valsa. Love for your parents exudes throughout. Best to you.
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Date: 12/12/2022 8:00:00 AM
Yes, it is straight from the heart. When we talk about our parents, most of us don't have to feign emotions of love. It comes spontaneously ! Thanks a lot to you Vijay!
Date: 12/12/2022 1:19:00 AM
Beautiful tribute to your Mother and father Valsa, I always find Christmas time quite emotional as you look back and remember with fondness loved ones no longer there. But their spirit lives on in your heart and memories and pictures to remind you of them. Tom
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Date: 12/12/2022 3:15:00 AM
It is during Christmas that I grow so very nostalgic, remembering the sweet enjoyments we had with my siblings, parents and cousins. Our celebration was never pompous with rich gifts or colorful decorations. My father used to make a crib for infant Jesus and hang stars. It was with great excitement that we decorated the crib with figurines of Mary and Joseph, the magi and shepherds while my mother was busy cooking some special dishes.
Date: 12/12/2022 1:06:00 AM
Very optimistic and spiritual poem. Well done dear Valsa.
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Date: 12/12/2022 3:05:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Victor .....

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