Notes About The Poem

To My Knees

II Corinthians 12:9-10
"My grace is sufficient for you, for my power is made perfect in weakness." Therefore I will boast all the more gladly about my weaknesses ... for when I am weak, then I am strong.


I am but a blade of grass that's swaying in the breeze,
In the sun I'm growing fast but in the dark I freeze.
The sun shines on my time alone spent praying to my Lord,
But darkness reigns when I'm elsewhere to seek my own reward.

     Lord, I am the strongest when my own strength fades away,
     I know I see the clearest when I close my eyes to pray,
     Father, I am tallest when You bring me to my knees,
     So bring me to my knees today,
     Bring me to my knees to pray.

Often I am overcome with burdens and with fears,
Heaven seems so far away, I wonder if God hears.
Then I hear a still, small voice that calls me from within,
"I'll never leave you, nor forsake you, even to the end".

     Lord, I am the strongest when my own strength fades away,
     I know I see the clearest when I close my eyes to pray,
     Father, I am tallest when You bring me to my knees,
     So bring me to my knees today,
     Bring me to my knees to pray.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/5/2022 9:25:00 AM
Hi, congratulations John on being selected for Poetry Soups 2nd ever Antholgy Book. I love your poem - a blade of grass is tall but sways in the breeze, but you are tallest when praying on your knees, and where you find spiritual reward, and not swaying in the breeze, but kneeling, praying to Our Lord. Bless you John. Hugs, Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Date: 12/28/2021 11:24:00 AM
Your spirituality and belief runs so deeply, it is very moving, I also like the contrasting images of feeling small and insignificant like a blade of grass and then the inspiration of 'I am tallest when You bring me to my knees' - that humility is where strength and courage is found, this is simply splendid~
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2021 3:31:00 PM
Oh John, what a beautiful poem/song/prayer! Truly love all the stanzas, but the second and the fourth, expressing faith, joy, trust - bring tears to my eyes. This poem is truly a loving prayer for all mankind on earth - you are one of the few rare poets to pen such golden lines. A fave for me. Love and blessings, Dear John ~ Mala
Login to Reply
Date: 12/27/2021 1:58:00 PM
I really like this work of faith and character. I enjoyed reading each word. Thanks for the visit to my blog and for remembering Wayne in prayer. He is home, walking around some and doing a little. It will take time, but we feel he is going to make a full recovery and maybe feel better than he has in a long time. Sara
Login to Reply
Watt Avatar
John Watt
Date: 2/14/2022 10:36:00 PM
Sara, thank you for the thoughtful comment and the good news about Wayne!
Date: 12/26/2021 5:08:00 PM
In love with the refrain!
Login to Reply
Watt Avatar
John Watt
Date: 12/26/2021 8:36:00 PM
Thanks Kim! Sorry to hear about illness in your household... hope you all feel better in no time.
Date: 12/26/2021 1:46:00 PM
Your prayer is how I wish the world felt. There would be no hate or wars and love for humanity would mean trusting everyone. There would be global peace. Your prayer reaches out to claim that peace not just for yourself, but for everyone John. This poem is certainly a Fave for me. I hope you had a blessed Christmas. xxoo
Login to Reply
Watt Avatar
John Watt
Date: 12/26/2021 3:37:00 PM
Connie, the blessing of your fave gives me joy, but the blessing of your friendship is beyond words. May we always encourage each other's faith journey. Christmas blessings to you ~ John
Date: 12/25/2021 10:55:00 PM
well, Hmmmm (sorry about that). I knew mine did not have a chance, but i sure thought this one did. I hope you had a marvelous Christmas with your dear family, John. Thanks for the lovely comments. As of now, right before midnight, at last I am caught up on four days of comments that accumulated on me. Hoping tomorrow i can set aside juST for writing poems.
Login to Reply
Watt Avatar
John Watt
Date: 12/25/2021 11:57:00 PM
Yes, sit out on your balcony tomorrow, soak up the beauty of nature, and write, write, write! Thanks for your affirmation and encouragement - that means more than a contest win.
Date: 12/25/2021 10:04:00 AM
wow, this is awesome spiritual poetry, John. I will be surprised if you are not on his winner list. Merry Christmas and thanks for all your friendship through the short years I have known you.
Login to Reply
Watt Avatar
John Watt
Date: 12/26/2021 3:31:00 PM
Andrea, thank you and you're welcome.
Date: 12/25/2021 2:22:00 AM
Good morning, John, and thank you for writing about the strength we receive through prayer when we are feeling weak. Your refrain is beautiful.
Login to Reply
Watt Avatar
John Watt
Date: 12/26/2021 3:30:00 PM
Thank you Lin, for taking time to read and comment. Your words are truly appreciated ~ John
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter