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To My Future Wife

You are as nice as a red rose
encouraging me again and again
to write unique poems

You are the Helen of my heart
burning as like as the Troy

Where were you hiding so long
I find you out in a small corner
of this big universe
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Feb 12, 2014

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Brenda Meier-Hans

September 30, 2014 at 12:48 PM

Ah, congratulations on your win Mohammad

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 28, 2014 at 6:57 AM

- Mohammad, congrats with your winning poem - A wonderful 1st place !!! - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 28, 2014 at 5:37 AM

I enjoyed this sentimental write, congrats on the win, Mohammad

Judy Konos

September 27, 2014 at 11:09 AM

Thank you for entering my contest!

Jan Allison

September 27, 2014 at 8:29 AM

beautiful sentiment many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx

Skat A

June 20, 2014 at 6:07 PM

Mohammad, Congratulations, awesome breaking up poem....... SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos

June 19, 2014 at 9:22 AM

Congratulations, Mohammad, on a nice win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.

Poet Destroyer A

June 19, 2014 at 1:09 AM

Hi Mohammad, you did not follow the rules, however, I enjoyed your poem, .. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA

Fahmida Islam

January 26, 2014 at 7:54 AM

A nice one

Sheri Fresonke Harper

January 18, 2014 at 3:32 PM

Mohammad, good use of humor and form. Good way of describing the characteristics of your future wife in the stanzas. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my contest.