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To My Future Wife

You are as nice as a red rose encouraging me again and again to write unique poems You are the Helen of my heart burning as like as the Troy Where were you hiding so long I find you out in a small corner of this big universe ________________________ Feb 12, 2014

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Date: 9/30/2014 12:48:00 PM
Ah, congratulations on your win Mohammad
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Date: 9/28/2014 6:57:00 AM
- Mohammad, congrats with your winning poem - A wonderful 1st place !!! - Enjoy reading it - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2014 5:37:00 AM
I enjoyed this sentimental write, congrats on the win, Mohammad
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Date: 9/27/2014 11:09:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest!
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Date: 9/27/2014 8:29:00 AM
beautiful sentiment many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 6/20/2014 6:07:00 PM
Mohammad, Congratulations, awesome breaking up poem....... SKAT
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Date: 6/19/2014 9:22:00 AM
Congratulations, Mohammad, on a nice win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.
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Date: 6/19/2014 1:09:00 AM
Hi Mohammad, you did not follow the rules, however, I enjoyed your poem, .. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA
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Date: 1/26/2014 7:54:00 AM
A nice one
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Date: 1/18/2014 3:32:00 PM
Mohammad, good use of humor and form. Good way of describing the characteristics of your future wife in the stanzas. Congratulations on your win, thanks much for entering my contest.
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Date: 1/16/2014 6:09:00 PM
Your future wife will appreciate this dedication.
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Date: 1/14/2014 2:34:00 PM
- So sweet poem, Mohammad - I love it.... hope your future wife will also !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Mohammad Abedin
Date: 1/14/2014 5:38:00 PM
Thanks for your nice comments

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