Red Fiery Poet Personification

To My Erudite Lover

You are an erudite in disguise
dawn to dusk I dive in your blue eyes
You inspire even the legends 
Breaking the rules of the  established trends 
Carving a niche, With your poetic weave 
I fall for your truism, the intense criticism
Cannot conceal your Talent; for you are the gifted one 
In due course of time all platonic art will fade away 
The charm in your poetry would rise beyond the horizon of perfection !
Years , decades and the centuries  will sing of your glory 
human life is uncertain but your verses shall be chanted  by rivers and mountains 
I shall sleep with your immortal soul but Will you think of my soul ?

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Harry Horsman January 19, 2012 at 9:24 AM awesome red, where are you? harry

Moses Samandar January 16, 2012 at 6:23 AM Wow - Amazing!

Wayne Hill September 10, 2011 at 6:46 PM May your verses be repeated in the gleam of the stars....while making love to celestial bodies.

James Foulk May 29, 2011 at 8:57 PM a great write, well worded, niecely done. thank you for commenting on Breezes on the Lake

Matthew Anish May 29, 2011 at 8:40 PM Very mystical work! Keep it up! Yours Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick May 29, 2011 at 4:51 PM Good one..Enjoyed reading this eve..The earth has its own poetry..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work "Generic Bleach"...Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta May 29, 2011 at 4:02 PM Brilliant expressions poetic write, ending in a philosophic way, smriti

Poet Destroyer A May 29, 2011 at 3:29 PM wow! your lover must have the perfect subjects for you... deep blue like the sea... the ending was thoughtful,, well written, and erudite in its love ending,.. enjoyed,..p.d.

Sarah Seraphin May 29, 2011 at 2:42 PM * “How Can True Beauty Ever Escape * The Muse & Eyes & Dreams of Others * My Dear Precious & Beautiful Smriti. * Noticed Your Lovely Name At A Very Beautiful Ladies Poe Com Box * Wished to Pay A Visit * Glad I Did For I Enjoyed This Glimpse of Your Sweeetened Passion & Talent. * Great Verse * Hugs & Kissses * Kisssses & Hugs * Sarah” *

Michael Wayne May 29, 2011 at 2:39 PM I suppose this is not about me because I am a truck driver and had to look up the word erudite in my dictionary.... (must be a lucky guy) Can I think about your soul anyway...LOL

Dawn Mclaughlin May 29, 2011 at 2:14 PM I came back to give you 7/7 Smiles :)

Dawn Mclaughlin May 29, 2011 at 2:13 PM This pen is simply beautiful such emotion :@)