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To My Children

To My Children Your teeth are green. Your hot breath reeks. Your room is a mess. Your clothing stinks. Your voice is loud. Your ears are deaf. I am your maid and personal chef. I'm proud of you and all your traits Cause I'm the one Who made you great. Brenda Atry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/4/2012 1:01:00 PM
The ultimate coach, the ageless avenger - J.A.B. %
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Date: 11/24/2011 10:52:00 AM
am not actually a mother but i can relate.truthfully written and quite funny.
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Date: 11/23/2011 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Brenda. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2011 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Brenda
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Date: 5/2/2011 4:37:00 AM
Amusing and oh-so-true write!
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Date: 4/13/2011 8:58:00 PM
LOL- love it. I was expecting something mushy and gushy and hallmark-y, but this, this is sooooooooo much better. Thanks for the laugh! Cyndi
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