Notes About The Poem

Love's cornerstone set
Forty-five years together
Dear wife of my youth
Our sons, their wives, our lives full
May love's embrace continue

~ to the moon and back ~

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Poet's notes:
7/14/2018

Photo of our actual wedding cake topper :)

Forty-five years ago today
I walked down the aisle with a smile
My blushing young bride by my side :)

To My Bride of Forty-Five

Love's cornerstone set
Forty-five years together
Dear wife of my youth
Our sons, their wives, our lives full
May love's embrace continue 

~ to the moon and back ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Da Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Wow, this is just wonderful. Sincerity is evident..
Toney Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 10:47 AM
Karen, thank you so much for stopping by and giving such a nice, encouraging comment. You've made my day!
Faulkner Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 4:26 PM
Such a sweet love story, especially the last line "to the moon and back!"
Toney Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 7:13 PM
Thank you for your lovely compliment, Michelle :)
Nance Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 5:02 PM
aww... that is wonderful :) :)
Toney Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 7:43 PM
Thank you, Casarah for your kind comment.
Man Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 12:54 PM
Mark, your tanka is a beautiful tribute to your wife on your amazing 45th anniversary. I hope this coming year is your best ever!!
Toney Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Your comment has touched our hearts. Thank you, Lyric Man.
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