To My Beloved

Have written you a letter beloved, but I must read it to your engraved name. Without you my life is just not the same! Oh, why did you have to leave me alone? It was God's will- your destiny written, our time was so short but you gave me much; you opened my mind and heart with your touch, you changed me from a shy girl made of stone. Encouraged me to wander paths unknown, to let my pen bleed the words in my heart; our sweet love will never truly depart, all your love left within me will be shown. Can you kiss my rosy lips with the rain? Never Love- will I let go of this pain! ___________________________ December 10, 2018 Poetry/Canzone/To My Beloved Copyright Protected, ID 18-1093-449-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Last Letter to My Beloved sponsor, Silent One First Place Written in: Dante's Canzone Form- abbcdeeccffcgg - 10 syllable lines
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La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 2:25 PM
Thank you Alexis, DM, Anne-Lise and Silent for visiting my poem with those great comments and congratulations ~
Y. Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 4:20 PM
Hi BW, You have penned such a touching letter. Nice rhymes and content. Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest:-) Alexis
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 2:22 PM
~.~
Babbit Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 11:54 AM
Nicely written, congrats on your win.
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 2:23 PM
:-)
Andresen Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 11:49 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, D.H. .... gorgeous poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 2:23 PM
Hugs~
One Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 11:13 AM
Sometimes we can never let of the pain.. You write emotive poems so well.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
La France Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 2:24 PM
Silent, thank your for the contest and for my fine placement, appreciate ~
La France Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 1:10 PM
Thank you Carolyn and Charles for visiting my poem with those great comments, appreciate ~
Messina Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Dear Heart. I felt every line of sadness in this. So sorry...best of luck in the contest dear friend. Great Write! xx Charlie
La France Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 1:09 PM
xoxo !!
Devonshire Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 6:12 AM
When we miss someone this much, I like to believe they can still reach us, Dear Heart. Eloquently written and a very good entry for the contest. Sending winning wishes your way. Love, Carolyn
La France Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 1:08 PM
Love back !
La France Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 4:30 AM
Thank you Harry and Mark for visiting my poem with those great comments, appreciate ~
Horsman Avatar
December 11, 2018 at 4:33 PM
This is so beautiful, yes, heartfelt, but again beautiful.
La France Avatar
December 12, 2018 at 4:29 AM
~.~
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