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When I grow up may I feel free from abusive quiver, you know the shame and blame that makes me shiver. My innocence has been stolen without remorse or regret, those are the things a little girl can never forget. Growing older can be difficult, I may be someone full of sin- I may be someone who fears passion; afraid of the loss of love within. When you have children of your own, please don’t treat them like papa did, for every time he came around, I ran to my room and hid. I wish for myself a simple life, maybe be a mother and a wife- I deserve to dance around and twirl- for I am just an innocent little girl. What Child is This Contest October 16, 2017

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Date: 10/25/2017 5:30:00 PM
Gorgeous write - I love the direction you took here, Laura - congrats on your win! :-) <3
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Date: 10/18/2017 6:30:00 PM
This contest turned out different from what I thought it was going to be, Laura congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/18/2017 8:35:00 PM
many thanks sweet Eve :)
Date: 10/18/2017 3:40:00 PM
Oh Laura, Your heartfelt words touched me deeply. I was abused as a child and I identified with your more than you know. Congratulations on your placement in the contest. It was well deserved- Alexis
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/18/2017 8:35:00 PM
sorry for you too Alexis...have a blessed day :)
Date: 10/18/2017 12:21:00 PM
This is so heartfelt and beautiful.... so painful too, and recognizable. congratulations on your placement.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/18/2017 8:35:00 PM
thank you Darren :)
Date: 10/16/2017 10:53:00 PM
Very moving poem. Troubling just the way it was meant to be. Awesome write.
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Lu Loo
Date: 10/18/2017 8:34:00 PM
many thanks Line!! :)

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