Anitha Jayasankar Poet Pantoum

To Leave All Cares Behind

When my mind yearns to leave all cares behind
In a moment of blithe joy and serenity
A calm soothing profound peace it would find
As soul would soak in a stream of tranquility

In a moment of blithe joy and serenity
Mind is light as it weaves thoughts nonchalant
As soul would soak in a stream of tranquility
Elated, ecstatic and  jubilant

Mind is light as it weaves thoughts nonchalant
As soul soars in a moment without a purpose
Elated, ecstatic, and jubilant 
I sense a smooth placid stillness and repose

As soul soars in a moment without a purpose
A calm soothing profound peace it would find
I sense a smooth placid stillness and repose
When my mind yearns to leave all cares behind

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Sara Kendrick February 18, 2021 at 4:55 AM I enjoyed reading your pantoum. These are not so easy to write but you have done a well here. Thanks for the visit to my page with congrats. Sara

JC Brul February 18, 2021 at 12:12 AM So very beautiful dear Ani..I love the last line. "When my mind yearns to leave all cares behind" You did a great choice of words that speak volumes. More to come!

Akkina Downing February 14, 2021 at 12:05 PM This is just beautiful, Ani. And I hope you’re doing great, my friend... Hugs~

Sara Kendrick February 14, 2021 at 7:46 AM Sometimes just a few moments of peace and tranquility helps with our physical health if only we can achieve it. Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Regina Mcintosh February 14, 2021 at 2:41 AM Lovely write. I enjoyed so much. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina

Anne-Lise Andresen February 12, 2021 at 7:51 AM - A sensitive and beautiful poem, Ani - I wish you a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rama Balasubramanian February 11, 2021 at 10:36 PM Another wonderful write, so many beautiful, profound lines. How is your mother in law.? Hope she is fine. Are you back home? Love and hugs. Take care Rama

Andrea Dietrich February 11, 2021 at 5:19 PM Beautiful, Anitha, and thanks so much for visiting me today. I know how busy we both are. I appreciate you a lot.

Victor Buhagiar February 11, 2021 at 8:34 AM Your pantoun is excellent. ~~