To Keep the Wolves Away

My brave son of seven is leaving!
to spar with military jaws.
And I repeat, Lycurgis taught me these three laws:
to keep the wolves away: if I say three words today,
may they be concise and may they be brief-
"Equality, austerity, and military pay." 
And stole my son at seven, a Thief.

Equality lives in every mothers' grief;
   -' my son the soldier is fit and neat.'
Austere and upright, conditioned to bow and beat.
Yet, I remember seven years ago
his curls when I bore him to breast,
and fed him into a peaceful rest.

In the dark haze before sunrise, I awake to work.
Weave my sandals tight and high on my calves;
My tunic, short and stark, unadorned and Spartan.
I draw water from the well and bake the bread in halves.
One for me and one for him, to reconcile my every sin.

D.Goodman
Laconic contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Price Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 9:28 PM
I fear and embrace I will be writing this way once I have children as well. Great poem
Poet Avatar
December 19, 2013 at 10:33 AM
IT IS AN AWESOME POEM AND I LIKED IT.PLEASE DO COMMENT ON MINE ALSO
Jeffery  Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 3:21 PM
I think this brilliant.. beautifully vivid imagery and even a mini a story to follow, will definitely be reading more of your stuff!
Ramacher Avatar
December 18, 2013 at 2:59 PM
Awesome! Relevant in many ways to any mother whose son is about to brave the world, mine leaving shortly to do just that.
Gregory Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 2:25 PM
you shone on this conditioning, the versatility of a poet...reminding me of my mothers tear... well done
Cee Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 8:30 AM
Make me smile :) well, this is wonderful myth...myth... myth... approach!
Gasun Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 3:26 AM
An awesome write my friend. I enjoyed reading it this afternoon. TYSM for sharing and my big hearty congratulations on your great win! love lots and biggest hugs, Leonora
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 9:38 PM
congrats for your win. this has a classic poetry feel to it.
Ligon Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 6:24 PM
Very well versed, Daisy. Congrats!
Ekechukwu Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 11:37 PM
A wonderful write,kudos! I love d Spartans,d were gallant warriors in history. Welcome to poetrysoup,here u find d poetic treasures in vast quantities. Alwaz, Based oin Belief
Peterson Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 11:44 AM
Astonishing in its breadth of verse, rhyme and feeling. I got lost in the words and am still trying to find my way back. High praise for your top finish.
Goodman Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 12:40 PM
Thank you! I'm the wife of a disabled Iraq veteran... this poem tried to capture what mothers and wives of soldiers endure...when they are deployed, back home, or gone. We work overtime, pray for their safety, and carry on until they return.
Melugin Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 9:09 AM
Creative genius!
Goodman Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 11:30 AM
Wow, thanks I really appreciate it! My first win! yay
Sergi Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 7:04 AM
wonderful creative work
Goodman Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 11:30 AM
Thanks so much!
Mehta Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 4:55 AM
Congrats on the win, Daisy
Goodman Avatar
November 29, 2013 at 11:30 AM
Thank you, really appreciate it.
Kithinji Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 10:33 AM
Enjoyed and thinking it's deep.
Goodman Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 4:28 PM
Thank you! appreciate it!
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November 27, 2013 at 9:10 PM
deep thoughts to this one, i hope you have a nice thanksgiving, always, p.d.
Goodman Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 4:29 PM
Thanks, happy turkey day to you too!
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