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To Her Heaven, I Sigh


Naked to bare as I look in her eyes
Her hands meet mine, to her heaven, I sigh
In gentle touch, her breathing becomes 
Whispers to me, two to become one



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Copyright © James Fraser | Year Posted 2014

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July 26, 2014 at 6:46 PM

Very sensual James...well done...Tim

July 27, 2014 at 11:45 AM

Many thanks Tim :)

Pandita Sietesantos

July 26, 2014 at 5:12 PM

One word - EXQUISITE! Just simply love it!!!!!

July 26, 2014 at 5:25 PM

Blushing proudly Pandita, offering many thanks, James......xx

July 26, 2014 at 3:52 PM

Oh my goodness babe I love it! well done!!

July 26, 2014 at 7:13 PM

Well you are good at it, I had to come back and read it again xx

July 26, 2014 at 4:02 PM

As I mentioned below, it's been a while since such a poem has been posted by me. Thank you kindly Casarah, for your always kind words, James :) x

Carrie Richards

July 26, 2014 at 3:52 PM

Even the title takes one's breath away...so romantic....wow !

July 26, 2014 at 4:10 PM

To me, it's the only Heaven I've known. Not because of the obvious, but the life it allows to live, it's quite incredible to be honest!

Charmaine Chircop

July 26, 2014 at 3:49 PM

So sensual and romantic ,James.What a beauty!!!

July 27, 2014 at 1:40 PM

Glad you liked it Charmaine. Happy Sunday to you and Christina :)

Anna-Marie Docherty

July 26, 2014 at 3:38 PM

Deeply touching James, well done... and deepest sympathies if this is personal to you

July 26, 2014 at 3:33 PM

Very nice piece !

July 26, 2014 at 3:36 PM

Thanks kindly Nigel, it's been a while since I penned such a poem, James....

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