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To Her Ardent Mister

Parody on Andrew Marvell’s “To My Coy Mistress” Had we but World enough and Time Your mating call, sir, were no crime. If lifetimes were more than a few I’d spend an Age for each of you. First with a Parisian lover For a century I’d hover. Then hot Latino macho boy Will fill a few decades with joy. Then I meander solo East On diverse cultures I would feast. When great adventures I’m done with I’d meditate on what Life is. For Lady I deserve such state Not would I love at lower rate. Then comes the quest for the best part - To whom I shall invest my heart. But, sir, you’re right, there is no time To waste on matters less sublime. I’d rather spend all years I have On vast eternity of Love. Your mortal fears I’d gladly spurn, The grave would be my last concern. About my pores with instant Fires?! They’ll last a lifetime to transpire. Into my coyness do not delve Handle your ardour, sir, yourself! December 28, 2020

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Date: 2/29/2024 9:24:00 AM
Dear Margarita, congratulations for your win in Brian's contest with this exceptional and beautifully executed parody poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/1/2024 4:16:00 PM
Thank you Susan.
Date: 2/22/2021 5:05:00 PM
Your parody of "To My Coy Mistress" is very well done
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Date: 1/10/2021 6:41:00 PM
Hi Margarita - 'To His Coy Mistress' is one of my all time favorites, and your parady is top notch -and those final lines, such word perfect wit! A must have for my faves! (also congrats on the contest win!)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/15/2021 6:10:00 AM
Thank you! M.
Date: 1/9/2021 11:00:00 AM
Congrats on your win! a lovely parody and so entertaining!!
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 1/15/2021 6:11:00 AM
THX. M.
Date: 1/8/2021 9:42:00 PM
Margarita, CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 12/31/2020 10:37:00 AM
Hmmm, seems like I've heard that line before... Good luck in the contest, Maggie, nicely done. Hugs.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/31/2020 11:07:00 AM
There are always two sides to anything:)

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