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Sponsor: Jaymee Thomas 

Contest:  After Poems

To Her Ardent Mister

after  To My Coy Mistress by  Andrew Marvell 

Had we but World enough and Time 
Your mating call, sir, were no crime.  
If lifetimes were more than a  few 
I’d spend an Age for each of you. 

First with a Parisian lover 
For a century I’d hover.
Then hot Latino macho boy 
Will fill a few decades with joy.

Then I meander solo East 
On diverse cultures I would feast. 
When great adventures I’m done with 
I’d meditate on what Life is. 

For, Mister, I deserve such state 
Not would I love at lower rate.
Then comes the quest for the best part - 
To whom I shall invest my heart. 

But, sir, you’re right, there is no time 
To waste on matters less sublime. 
I’d rather spend all years I have 
On vast eternity of Love. 

Your mortal fears I’d gladly spurn,
The grave would be my last concern. 
About my pores with instant Fires?! 
They’ll last a lifetime to transpire. 

Into my coyness do not delve 
Handle your ardour, sir, yourself!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ashley Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 9:24 AM
Dear Margarita, congratulations for your win in Brian's contest with this exceptional and beautifully executed parody poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Lillico  Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 4:16 PM
Thank you Susan.
Wheeler Avatar
February 22, 2021 at 5:05 PM
Your parody of "To My Coy Mistress" is very well done
Faulkner Avatar
January 10, 2021 at 6:41 PM
Hi Margarita - 'To His Coy Mistress' is one of my all time favorites, and your parady is top notch -and those final lines, such word perfect wit! A must have for my faves! (also congrats on the contest win!)
Lillico  Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 6:10 AM
Thank you! M.
Radhakrishna Avatar
January 9, 2021 at 11:00 AM
Congrats on your win! a lovely parody and so entertaining!!
Lillico  Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 6:11 AM
THX. M.
Canerdy Avatar
January 8, 2021 at 9:42 PM
Margarita, CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Gondolf Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 10:37 AM
Hmmm, seems like I've heard that line before... Good luck in the contest, Maggie, nicely done. Hugs.
Lillico  Avatar
December 31, 2020 at 11:07 AM
There are always two sides to anything:)
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