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To Her

Here's to dying, rueful eyes, beautiful but made to cry; to a mouth too choked to sing, and ears that can't hear anything. Here's to needles 'neath the skin, burning just to be on him; to the blood that swells and drips, reminiscent of his lips. Here's to spasms of tortured flesh, strong until she 'came bereft, and palpitations in her chest; heartbeats fading with her best. Here's to shrieks and severed bone, the fleeing of her mobile home; to a new found heart of stone, broken with a warning.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/4/2019 11:31:00 AM
I like how each stanza takes off with 'Here's to' and continues with a biological identity, it provides a very strong sense of direction in imagery
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Julian Garretti
Date: 1/4/2019 12:07:00 PM
Thanks a lot for the feedback! I’m glad you like it and to hear it’s effective.

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