To Her

Here's to dying, rueful eyes,
beautiful but made to cry;
to a mouth too choked to sing, 
and ears that can't hear anything.

Here's to needles 'neath the skin,
burning just to be on him;
to the blood that swells and drips,
reminiscent of his lips.

Here's to spasms of tortured flesh,
strong until she 'came bereft,
and palpitations in her chest;
heartbeats fading with her best.

Here's to shrieks and severed bone,
the fleeing of her mobile home;
to a new found heart of stone,
broken with a warning.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Chiean Tien Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 11:31 AM
I like how each stanza takes off with 'Here's to' and continues with a biological identity, it provides a very strong sense of direction in imagery
Garretti Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 12:07 PM
Thanks a lot for the feedback! I’m glad you like it and to hear it’s effective.
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