To Fly

When I take flight, will it be by day or night? Will you see me, even if I am right in front of thee? To fly like an angel I would be, loving you and flying very free. I would like to fly, fly into the bright blue sky. I will be there when you cry, I will help to dry your tearful eye. As an angel I would want to fly and flee, loving you and flying with glee. Then praying on one knee, under the flowering pink spring tree. I do not know if you can see me, I will be with a big yellow bumble bee.

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Terry Miller

Date: 5/19/2025 1:47:00 AM

Love this Paula, congratulations

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/19/2025 8:02:00 AM

Thank You for your visit, comment and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "To Fly" angel write. Great to see you. As writers we need to let our imagination roam with blessings along the way........

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/18/2025 1:50:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Paula. Yay :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/19/2025 8:01:00 AM

Thank You for your visit, comment and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "To Fly" angel write. Always great to see you here. As writers we need to let our imagination roam with blessings along the way........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/18/2025 8:47:00 AM

"Honorable Mention" To Fly ~ Date Written: 5/7/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet. ~ Pick-A-Title, Vol 51-Poetry Contest ~ Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/18/2025 1:54:00 AM

- Congratulations, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/18/2025 8:54:00 AM

Thank You for your visit, comment and for your Congratulations. Glad you came back to read my fun "To Fly" angel write again. Always great to see you here. As writers we need to let our imagination roam with blessings along the way........

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/12/2025 7:22:00 AM

Any form it takes, enjoy. I like the desire for freedom in this poem.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/18/2025 8:52:00 AM

Thank You for your visit, comment and for your very kind words. Glad you enjoyed my fun "To Fly" angel write. Guess my imagination was working overtime. Yes, be free as we fly. As writers we need to let our imagination roam with blessings along the way............

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/11/2025 12:55:00 PM

Mental applause, can you feel it? The emotion was touching, the flying GREAT FUN. You took me on a delightful poetic flight and I freedom soared! Thank you ... CayCay

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/18/2025 8:49:00 AM

Thank You for your visit, comment and for your very kind words. Glad you enjoyed my fun "To Fly" angel write. My imagination was working overtime on flying an having fun just like angels do. As writers we need to let our imagination roam with blessings along the way............

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/9/2025 1:35:00 PM

This is freeing, beautiful and loving. So very nice Paula. Hugs :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/10/2025 2:43:00 PM

Thank You for your visit and comment. Glad you found my fun "To Fly" angel to be, freeing, beautiful and loving. So very nice. This one was fun to write. Hugs... As writers we need to let our imagination roam with blessings along the way................

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/8/2025 6:22:00 AM

Dear Paula, After reading I soar with gentle hope and love. Oh, the longing to fly-free, angelic, present for those you cherish-radiates warmth and care. Flight in your words feel like freedom and spiritual connection, a promise to comfort and uplift, even if unseen. And that bright yellow bumblebee? It’s joy, resilience, and positivity-your spirit buzzing close, always ready to dry a tear and bring a smile. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/9/2025 12:24:00 PM

Thank You for your visit, comment and for your very kind words. Glad you enjoyed my fun "To Fly" angel write. My imagination was working overtime on this one. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. As writers we need to let our imagination roam with blessings along the way............

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/8/2025 3:28:00 AM

Very uplifting, angelic write. So important for people to know that something greater than ourselves, a celestial being of immense love and power has our backs. Blessings my friend. Lovely read!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/9/2025 12:21:00 PM

Thank You for your visit and comment. Glad you found my fun "To Fly" angel to be, Very uplifting, angelic write. That makes me happy. This was fun to write. As writers we need to let our imagination roam with blessings along the way................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/7/2025 1:37:00 PM

My expeience of you is you are an earth angel, do you know that! Another FAV for me, your interest in whats going on with me is outstanding. You are not a comment machine you really are a human being. I must applaud you for that.. and of course this is a fav! And will be marked as such, Pangie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/9/2025 12:15:00 PM

Thank You for your visit, comment and very kind words. I see FAV??? WOW!!! Thank You... Glad you enjoyed my fun "To Fly" angel write. My imagination was working overtime on this one. As writers we need to let our imagination roam with blessings along the way............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/7/2025 12:44:00 PM

Aha .. it was you ... you flew on my front porch this morning ... I said it out loud ... "you were really big" ... a fun and entertaining poem, Paula :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/9/2025 12:12:00 PM

Thank You for your visit, comment and for your Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found my fun "To Fly" angel write to be, a fun and entertaining poem. So glad you enjoyed reading. It was me over your front porch. Hahaha!!! My imagination can be like a run away train. Hugs... As writers we need to let our imagination roam with blessings along the way........

Crystol Woods

Date: 5/7/2025 11:21:00 AM

How sweet! I've enjoyed reading your poetry today! Xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/7/2025 11:58:00 AM

Thank You for your visit and comment. Glad you found my fun "To Fly" angel write to be, How sweet. So glad you enjoyed reading. It was a fun write. My imagination was working overtime on this one. As writers we need to let our imagination roam with blessings along the way................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/7/2025 11:17:00 AM

Like a dream! Compassionate and filled with wonder! Blessings xx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/7/2025 11:55:00 AM

Thank You for your visit and comment. Glad you found my fun "To Fly" angel write to be, Like a dream. A fun write. My imagination and wonder were working overtime on this one. As writers we need to let our imagination roam with blessings along the way................

Chris Conn

Date: 5/7/2025 11:16:00 AM

To fly or not to fly - that too is the question.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/7/2025 11:50:00 AM

Thank You for your visit and comment. Glad you enjoyed my fun "To Fly" angel write. My imagination was working overtime on this one. As writers we need to let our imagination roam with blessings along the way............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/7/2025 8:46:00 AM

To Fly ~ Date Written: 5/7/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet. ~ Pick-A-Title, Vol 51-Poetry Contest ~ Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh