To Feel Motivated

I am not enough. I have no time. Delightful excuses: specters who will wander in my tomb and sing the songs of regrets.

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Date: 8/19/2025 11:40:00 AM
This Poem is deep. Straight to the point.
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A. Ormulyce
Date: 8/19/2025 6:10:00 PM
Thank you very much. I like tanka and haiku/senryu. They allow us to say a lot of things in a few words ;)
Date: 8/19/2025 9:24:00 AM
The lines have their prose meaning clear and immediate enough for the purposes of word perfection. They make the whole poem the word perfection. The poem also shares the poetic tradition with Yeasts's poem called, "Death": NOR dread nor hope attend A dying animal; A man awaits his end Dreading and hoping all; Many times he died, Many times rose again. ... The trouble is that, not all men are wishing to write bodily on what’s before us. A. Ormulyce has released a great gesture.
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A. Ormulyce
Date: 8/19/2025 6:06:00 PM
Thank you so much. I agree a man "dies" several times during his lifetime. I don't fear the final death; I fear being sent here for a new attempt...
Date: 6/16/2023 3:47:00 AM
So much regret - but make the time to lose it. I like the thoughts here, though not regrets, of course. I do like the verse, AO.
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A. Ormulyce
Date: 6/16/2023 11:38:00 PM
Thank you so much; glad you liked this piece.
Date: 6/15/2023 11:16:00 PM
Deep words which intoxicate the heart and soul with their unimaginable depth , It's a superb piece of poesy
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A. Ormulyce
Date: 6/16/2023 11:38:00 PM
Thank you so much for your appreciation.
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