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To Fear a Broken Heart

To quiver in darkness, lost love to blame. To build a tighter web to bind your heart. Troubled by reason, your soul to reclaim. To hide with the shadows, broken apart. To cover yourself from pain and sorrow, And flee from life, safe in darkness found. Inside the dark, will be no tomorrow. This despair you cling to, a chosen ground. A broken heart becomes your domain, Will always keep you from love's encroach. It brings you comfort this dark thirsty pain, A cold poisonous drink love will not approach. A slow death alone, as your tears begin. You hope love will find you worthy again. date written 10/14/15 Frederic Parker For the contest Trashed 4 sponsor Broken Wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/8/2015 10:37:00 PM
This makes me appreciate the love I have in my life. Great write. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/8/2015 12:56:00 PM
Frederic, Congratulations, SKAT
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Date: 12/8/2015 11:55:00 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/8/2015 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Frederic. I still love this one.
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Date: 10/15/2015 9:59:00 PM
THIS I can definitely relate to ... I do love your skill with this form ... love your Sonnets 7.... Bev
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Date: 10/14/2015 2:17:00 PM
Hi, Frederick. I particularly like the line, A broken heart becomes your domain." A broken heart certainly becomes the center of all thought when it feels the pain of loss. Thanks for sharing. ~ Lin ~
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Date: 10/14/2015 2:02:00 PM
languid in mood and tone... definitely a good stuff. frederick.. huggs
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Date: 10/14/2015 1:18:00 PM
Beautiful but sad sonnet Frederic:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/14/2015 1:17:00 PM
Nicely penned, Frederic! I enjoyed the read. My very best regards! :) john
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