To Fault

self made disaster

                              inner dialogue too loud

                                    to see the light





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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Faulkner Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 6:39 PM
Love "inner dialog too loud," sometimes I have arguments with myself - hard to say if I won or lost-
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 8:25 AM
Giggles! Thankya ;) xomo!
Krutsinger Avatar
July 19, 2018 at 5:36 AM
You nailed my feeling level.
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July 19, 2018 at 6:30 AM
An "ouch" with love. xomo!
Papyrus Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 3:04 PM
Light fits inside of darkness. Thanks for the dedication : )
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July 17, 2018 at 3:30 PM
I like that :) xomo!
Kendrick Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 6:18 PM
Interesting work. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 10:31 PM
Thank you Sara :) xomo
Dietrich Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 6:25 PM
A pearl of wisdom in this one!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 13, 2018 at 8:13 PM
Grit long time churned; success! <3
Talbot Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 10:44 AM
Many a time I should have kept my mouth shut, still, haven't learned! You most definitely hit the nail on the head, Mick
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 12:28 PM
So I says to myself, "stop saying that self! You're your own worst enemy. Are you listening?"... ;) xomo!
Turner Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 2:47 AM
You got that right! Good one, Mo:)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 8:12 AM
Really, really, nearly the death of me... and may be yet ;p xomo!
Sharp Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 1:20 AM
Concise and acute as always.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 8:11 AM
You're too kind and I'll take it. xomo ;)
Gauthier Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 12:31 AM
Sounds all too familiar, Maureen. Line xx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 8:00 AM
Literally nearly the death of me ;) but I figured this piece would do better without explanation (lol) xomo!
Deo Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 12:23 AM
Maureen, this is so wonderfully, truly, Zen! In my CHRIST-ian prayer workshops, I cannot help teaching one session on "FAST FOOD; SLOW THINKING." great senryu on accessing the SPACE of God (which I call the Canvas of Consciosuness, copyright someone else -yet we're PATENT-ly One.Shalom, shalom. We share Joys of maturing as poets.Thanx
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 12, 2018 at 8:09 AM
The Zen of hindsight ;) thank you Anil! I am honoured. I love your wit my friend, and your support is a blessing for which I am greatly appreciative. Thank you again :)) xomo!
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