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To Eve's Drop, Or Not To Eavesdrop

Forbidden fruit they had eaten At the bidding of the snake New ashamed that they were naked They had to cover up, for Heaven's sake "Adam, lets sew ourselves some fig-leaves." "Sounds good to me, dear Eve." God paid them no attention Had he a trick up His sleeve? Instead of random eavesdropping The Lord did something eye-popping He searched for Adam as if He had no clue Then cried out, "Man, where are you?!" Did the All-Seeing not know Man's whereabouts? Did He need resort to a primal shout?... Within God's question lies a lesson to which some choose to adhere God does not want man to eavesdrop ~ Do you hear? December 11, 2019 Listening In Poetry Contest Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/10/2020 12:02:00 PM

Congratulations. Great write. Wish this could go out to the world. Great lesson here.................

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/10/2020 1:58:00 PM

Very kind comment you've penned, Paula. Thank you so much. Best wishes, Gershon

Anna Hopper

Date: 1/9/2020 10:43:00 AM

This is awesome! New fav

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/9/2020 2:33:00 PM

Hey, thank you so much for the FAVE, Anna! ~ Gershon

Jc Hawkens

Date: 1/8/2020 7:09:00 PM

Well penned! congrats! JC

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/8/2020 7:48:00 PM

J.C., thanks for noticing my placement in the contest! Best wishes, Gershon

Juliet Ligon

Date: 1/5/2020 9:43:00 AM

Very clever! Congrats!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/5/2020 12:29:00 PM

Hey, thanks for noticing my placement, Juliet. Appreciated. Blessings, Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/5/2020 8:41:00 AM

Back with well deserved congrats. A FAVE.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/5/2020 12:28:00 PM

Thank you so much for noticing, Line, and for the FAVE!! Always a treat to get one. Warmest wishes, Gershon

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 1/5/2020 8:38:00 AM

Brilliant and clever and fabulous poem my dear Wolf Man! A fave! I know you knew I would love this one ;), Congratulations on your win! Podium hugs!!!! xomo <3

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/5/2020 12:27:00 PM

Hey, really had no idea… and how about your #1 finish, mademoiselle! Way to go! Thanks, Maureen. Warmest wishes, Gershon

Julia Ward

Date: 1/5/2020 1:03:00 AM

A lot of thought went into your poem and its cleverness is outstanding. Congratulations for doing so well in my contest, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/5/2020 12:04:00 PM

Julia, I appreciate your generous evaluation of my effort and thank you for the opportunity your contest gave me and all of us on the Soup. Happy 2019, Gershon

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/13/2019 4:47:00 PM

Profound existential pondering, Mr. Wolf! We know that God is omnipotent. Therefore asking Adam, "Where art thou?" was a rhetorical question, whose answer was already known to God. Then as your keen poem presciently reveal ... Eavesdropping does not cure curiosity's ill. A stellar work of poetic art! Love and more love always.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/14/2019 6:50:00 PM

Freddie, your thoughtful, perceptive comments are a true inspiration! You're so right about eavesdropping --- turned into Eve's droppings, so to speak. Thanks, my friend. Peace and Joy, gw

Line Gauthier

Date: 12/12/2019 8:36:00 AM

Love the line "Within God's question lies a lesson" and especially how you preceded it with "Instead of random eavesdropping The Lord did something eye-popping He searched for Adam as if He had no clue Then cried out, "Man, where are you?!"" - This poem stops the reader in our tracks. Love it. Superbly done, Gershon.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2019 1:30:00 PM

Wow. Thanks for the inspirational comment, Line. Warm wishes, Gershon

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/12/2019 3:45:00 AM

I hear you loudly and clearly! Good luck in the contest.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2019 1:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Caren. Cheers, Gershon