To Die of Love

Lean in, oh so close, my love, and kiss my waning cheek.
For you have taken all I have and yet your love is sweet.
Wrap me in your velvet cloak and gently lay me down;
I need not now my feathered bed but rather broken ground.

You promised that our love would last the winding centuries,
But now I know, as my blood flows, there’s nothing left to see.
I told you I would follow you as long as I had life
Now I see, that more than me, you only loved the night.

Your hurried footsteps tell me that the coming dawn is nigh
You did not stay for my last breath but left me here to die.
One day, I think, that you will tire of all that you have been,
You’ll touch the sun and call my name and love me once again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Cohen Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 6:26 PM
So lyrical and moving, Jean. This is inspired stuff.
Bush Avatar
June 7, 2021 at 10:33 AM
Thank you, Eric. Sorry to be so late getting back to you but I was not notified of your sweet comment.
Shaw Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 11:14 PM
What a brilliant and wonderful poetess you are Jean, if quality had to verse quantity at any time, then the quality of your poems would always win . . . : )
Bush Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 11:36 AM
How very sweet of you. Thank you for the lovely compliment.
Wolves Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 10:02 AM
Those danged vampires are soooo untrustworthy... awesome write, captivating this is....
Bush Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 10:48 AM
Thanks so much.
Green Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 12:40 PM
I really enjoyed this, the longing and the heart break could easily be felt.
Bush Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 12:44 PM
Thanks so much, Chris. Nice to see you here.
Wolf Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 12:50 AM
Wonderful, the way you wrapped this poem so gracefully around the title, and even exited with a message of hope. Really, really super, Jean! :) Gershon
Bush Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 9:54 AM
Thanks so much, Gershon, your comments mean a lot.
Sands Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 5:04 PM
Wow, a powerful poem. Well done :)
Bush Avatar
February 2, 2020 at 5:17 PM
Thanks so much, Heidi.
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