To Deceive

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Our actions don't just happen. We make choices and these have consequences.

Choosing betrayal weight of deception and lies burden best put down

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FJ Thomas

Date: 4/21/2018 12:08:00 PM

So very true Susan. But the deceivers don't usually care.

Susan Gentry
Date: 4/22/2018 12:10:00 PM

Thank you FJ.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2015 3:26:00 PM

yes, that is indeed a burden to put down!

Susan Gentry
Date: 12/2/2015 10:05:00 PM

Thank you for reading and commenting. Take care.

Skat A

Date: 12/1/2015 5:52:00 AM

Deep haiku

Susan Gentry
Date: 12/2/2015 10:05:00 PM

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/29/2015 9:45:00 AM

Dropping by looking for a new poem. I hope all is well with you.

Susan Gentry
Date: 11/29/2015 11:54:00 PM

Thanks for stopping by! Yes, some family health issues getting most of my attention. Things are going well though. Take care and thanks again.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/27/2015 7:15:00 AM

So many choose to carry there burdens throughout their lives. Even a glass of water becomes heavy if held long enough.

Susan Gentry
Date: 11/29/2015 11:40:00 PM

It sure can be. Thanks Richard for reading and responding. Means a lot.