Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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- From the dark side of life - Is it the truth about the reality we seek ?

- To Deal With Demons -

Wake up in my real world
Forever condemned in dark shadows
Release the power of demons
No light ... a black nothing, bats enjoying the place
Their fangs are the tools of their lust for human flesh and blood
The demons have chosen me to give birth to their children
It is not love
Brutal rape
Chained in their power
Inferno of fire, blood, death and hell
My days are numbered
Whoever betrays the demons get to taste the whip
A nightmare twenty four hours a day
Even in my dreams, they haunt my soul
Attacked of demons I am
My psyche is completely collapsed
Find myself in a pure terror condition
I would rather want to die as soon as possible,
than to fight the demons
The animal is the Devil himself









15.03.2016
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Teddy Kimathi May 18, 2016 at 8:13 AM That picture reminds me of white walkers in "Game of Thrones." Congrats Anne Lise, for your placement in the contest!! ;-) Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2016 at 12:15 PM - Teddy, thanks for visiting and congrats on my poem : - To Deal With Demons - :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Haight May 16, 2016 at 9:24 AM Anne-Lise, a very dark and thought- provoking poem. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Anne-Lise Andresen May 16, 2016 at 9:55 AM - Thanks for visiting and congrats on my poem, Sandra - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Weston Gregory March 28, 2016 at 9:46 AM Your piece speak of being a pawn has now vast amount of us are. I think you did well in painting such a vivid image. Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2016 at 11:36 AM - Thankfully only imagination, Weston :) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman March 23, 2016 at 7:01 AM Interesting challenge that you've met quite well. You have to place yourself in a dark place to write truly dark poetry. Don't dwell there. It's a labyrinth that's easy to get lost in. Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2016 at 7:26 AM - I prefer happy poems, James :))) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort March 19, 2016 at 3:28 PM Well they say there is a dark side. No doubt. We do have animal tendencies that come from somewhere. We only hope that our civility and society can keep us in check. The irony is having you (the sweetest blonde poetess) go there! The things happening on this earth are sometimes very frightening, yet there is a slow march to goodness. Long live solar energy and wind power!! Anne-Lise Andresen March 19, 2016 at 3:46 PM - ..... :)))))) .............. nobody knows what hides behind "the sweetest blonde poetess " :)))) - Duke, thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cherl Dunn March 19, 2016 at 1:49 PM Dear Anne Lise A different type then I'm use two from you my friend, but I totally loved it alot, it has a wonderful dark sided feeling to it, it captured my darker side, truly awesome, cheri Vera Duggan March 24, 2016 at 12:27 AM I agree with Cheryl, it's not like you to write something like this it is more her style of writing but it just goes to show how creative you are, well done.......Vera Anne-Lise Andresen March 19, 2016 at 2:36 PM - Cherl, thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jean Murray March 18, 2016 at 6:43 PM Wonderful terror. Anne-Lise Andresen March 19, 2016 at 5:56 AM - Thank you for visits and comments, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brian Mcclain March 18, 2016 at 5:07 PM Hi Anne, Dang--that's wild. Awesome poem, well-written! I need me a 50-foot-tall crucifix and a 50-pound sack of garlic after reading this. Anne-Lise Andresen March 19, 2016 at 5:56 AM :))))) - Brian, thank you for visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 18, 2016 at 10:03 AM wow, a very powerful, raw write, anne.. i am enjoying this other side of you.. happy friday and huggs Anne-Lise Andresen March 19, 2016 at 5:55 AM - Thank you for visits and comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Whatley March 18, 2016 at 8:27 AM Dark, melancholic write, Anne - such is the frighteningly selfish and primitive nature of the real world - well expressed indeed. Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2016 at 9:52 AM - Thank you for visits and comments, Michael :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France March 17, 2016 at 5:57 PM Anne Lise, wow, what an incredible write, and what an awesome image, I am loving this 7 for sure ~ Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2016 at 4:13 AM - B.W., thank you for the comments a 7 and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jim Meissner March 17, 2016 at 3:08 PM Emotionally evoking fear. Love it. Deep, Dark, Hopeless...Encompasses and expresses real fear. Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2016 at 3:49 PM - I prefer angels, love, smile and nature poems Jim :) - There is so much dark and sad in the world ...... I need to brighten up your day with my writing :) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner March 17, 2016 at 7:19 AM My goodness Anne-Lise, did you eat something that upset your stomach before bed. I believe in expansion of ones boundaries but this just doesn't sound like you. Very very dark and a little twisted. I hope you've gotten it all out. Looking for your smile. Peace my dear:) Well written just not my genre. Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2016 at 9:24 AM - There will come many more smiles in the future, Daniel :) Daniel Turner March 17, 2016 at 8:56 AM I suppose in reality, all can go there, but when I think of you...it's a stretch. It is well written but I ,personally, prefer the bubbly friendly you and the smiles:):) Peace my kind friend:):) Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2016 at 8:46 AM - You need not be concerned Daniel, this is a writing that is not my style ..... - A "proof" that I "can" go deep and dark ..... very dark :)))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish March 16, 2016 at 8:28 PM Seems like a song by Black Sabbath. Nice and mysterious. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2016 at 9:21 AM - Never liked Black Sabbath music, Matthew - Thank you for the comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 16, 2016 at 5:36 PM it's an angel day, anne.. hope you are fine!..huggs Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2016 at 8:48 AM - Everything is fine, Nette :)))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jasper Matthews March 16, 2016 at 12:54 PM Wow I .....excellent flow of words keep it coming because enough is never enough a flowing 8 for me Jasper Matthews March 17, 2016 at 12:32 PM and hey I got a new poem on deck Jasper Matthews March 17, 2016 at 12:31 PM yes I loved it actually Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2016 at 9:19 AM - Nice you like this, Jasper - Thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath March 16, 2016 at 12:46 PM It's very hard to fight with inner and out demons both but we can try to come out from such devilish hell with the grace of God. Very deeply penned. Lovely 7. Beautifully done my lovely lovely friend, bl Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2016 at 9:13 AM - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior March 16, 2016 at 8:51 AM You talk about the Dark Ones...for they are always hungering for our souls...I like this side of you Anne Lise...in a way it is a good thing to bring out both sides...one can not experience true light until they visit the darkest dark...with a dark hug lol...^WW^ Anne-Lise Andresen March 17, 2016 at 9:17 AM - I prefer the light Winged :))) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick March 16, 2016 at 8:13 AM That is a terrible state of mind..Reads like one in hell..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2016 at 8:28 AM - lol .... yes dear Sara, I think it's hell - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam March 16, 2016 at 2:44 AM Very unusual write from you but I like it. Good poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it my friend. Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2016 at 4:41 AM - Not my style at all Ravi, a challenge - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Walter T. Ashe March 15, 2016 at 9:01 PM You most definitely met your challenge! Dissipate the dark with that shining bright light of yours!...for you are "Light!" :-) Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2016 at 4:37 AM - I prefer angels, love, smile and nature :) - Thank you for friendly visits and lovely comments, Walter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shaunda Lindsay March 15, 2016 at 4:30 PM I like this. A lot. So you know, my husband plays in a thrash metal band and I really believe you could be a lyricist for any metal band. Good one dear. Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2016 at 12:30 PM - Is there "big" money to earn, so maybe I am considering it :))))) Shaunda Lindsay March 16, 2016 at 8:25 AM lolol Well, If you ever need work.. Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2016 at 4:30 AM - :)))) ...... Not exactly my music - Nice you like this - thank you for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit, Shaunda - hugs // Anne-Lise :)